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A real or imaginary story in which the media succeeded at telling,or failed to tell,the truth

A real or imaginary story in which the media succeeded at telling, or failed to tell, the truth aqGJV
In 2018, a 10 years old boy named ''Hossein Attaie" was a guest on a Tv program show, named "Now the sun". On that tv show, he claimed strange and unbelivable claims. For example, he claimed "great" companies, Such as Tesla and Volvo, has sent him job offers, He claimed he has lots of inventions, and he even said "I don't go to school, but i'm a university professer since 3 years ago! "Many sites and newspapers reflected this claimes, some with using "the genius" for him, some with "the lier". "Hamshahri newspaper", resarched about this claims, to see if they are wrong or right. After a short period of time, The truth was clear. He didn't had any inventions, He wasn't a university professer and Volvo and Tesla hasn't sent him any job offers. And his dad defense, just make every thing worse. We've undrstood to don't belive any thing eith out evidence, from thid boy which is a teen now.
In 2018, a 10 years
old
boy named ''Hossein
Attaie
"
was a guest on a
Tv
program
show
, named
"
Now
the sun
"
. On that
tv
show
, he claimed strange and
unbelivable
claims.
For example
, he claimed
"
great
"
companies
, Such as Tesla and Volvo, has
sent
him job offers, He claimed he has lots of inventions, and he even said
"
I don't go to school,
but
i'm
a university
professer
since 3 years ago!
"
Many
sites and newspapers reflected this
claimes
,
some
with using
"
the genius
"
for him,
some
with
"
the
lier
"
.
"
Hamshahri
newspaper
"
,
resarched
about
this
claims, to
see
if they are
wrong
or right. After a short period of time, The truth was
clear
. He didn't
had
any inventions, He wasn't a university
professer
and Volvo and Tesla hasn't
sent
him any job offers. And his dad defense,
just
make
every thing worse. We've
undrstood
to don't
belive
any thing
eith
out evidence, from
thid
boy which is a teen
now
.
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IELTS essay A real or imaginary story in which the media succeeded at telling, or failed to tell, the truth

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