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A quiet space is always my go-to choice when it comes to reading. I usually read books in the most comfortable corner of my house – my bedroom. Besides, reading in a book cafe with soothing music is also a good option. Sometimes, I read books in the library

A quiet space is always my go-to choice when it comes to reading. I usually read books in the most comfortable corner of my house – my bedroom. Besides, reading in a book cafe with soothing music is also a good option. Sometimes, I read books in the library Aw1dM
A quiet space is always my go-to choice when it comes to reading. I usually read books in the most comfortable corner of my house – my bedroom. Besides, reading in a book cafe with soothing music is also a good option. Sometimes, I read books in the library Well, an avid reader like me tends to fall in love with any page-turner. But to be honest, I’m still a big fan of the romantic novel Nguyễn Nhật Ánh. For example, " Co gai den tu hom qua", Cay chuoi non di giay xanh", Con chut gì de nho". Besides I also read a book about life skills, foreign literature, English, . . .
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IELTS essay A quiet space is always my go-to choice when it comes to reading. I usually read books in the most comfortable corner of my house – my bedroom. Besides, reading in a book cafe with soothing music is also a good option. Sometimes, I read books in the library

Essay
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114 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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