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a place where I’m able to relax or let my hair down

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Today, I’m going to share with you a place where I’m able to relax or let my hair down and read books as well as talk with my friends, which is a tiny café named “Khoanh Khac”. It’s located on Tran Binh Trong street, within a stone’s throw from my university. My first attention was caught by the Dalat-style design of this café. The walls, floors and window frames are made of wood, and the shelves are decorated with lots of antique publication in English, French, and Spanish. It creates a feeling of warming and nostalgia for customers. Also, the design with a natural space with a number of decorative trees, a small flower garden, and a tiny aquarium gives a feeling of refreshment and getting close to nature. Customers who have bought a drink or snack can freely take photos and record beautiful moments with their friends there. This is an ideal place for those who need to have a number of peace and quiet to work, read or take photographs. However, if you want to come here for reading, you should bring your own books due to the fact the coffee shop doesn't have Vietnamese books, or you can read a number of antique foreign language books on the shelves if you are multilingual and interested in them. The café has no loud noise, except a number of light music is played at a low volume combined with the sound of running water from the fishpond and adequate lighting provides a wonderful relaxing atmosphere. At present, because of the COVID-19 pandemic, all stores ought to close. Therefore, I cannot go to my favorite coffee shop and that makes me extremely sad. In the future, I hope the pandemic will end quickly consequently that on the weekend or after around-the-clock hours, I will go there in order to release pressure as well as chat with my close friends after stressful school days or find like-minded people.
Today
, I’m going to share with you a place where I’m able to relax or
let
my hair down and read
books
as well
as talk with my friends, which is a tiny café named “
Khoanh
Khac
”. It’s located on Tran
Binh
Trong
street, within a stone’s throw from my university.

My
first
attention
was caught
by the
Dalat-style
design of this café. The walls, floors and window frames
are made
of wood, and the shelves
are decorated
with lots of antique publication in English, French, and Spanish. It creates a feeling of warming and nostalgia for customers.
Also
, the design with a natural space with a
number
of decorative trees, a
small
flower garden, and a tiny aquarium gives a feeling of refreshment and getting close to nature. Customers who have
bought
a drink or snack can
freely
take photos and record
beautiful
moments with their friends there. This is an ideal place for those who need to have a
number
of peace and quiet to work, read or take photographs.
However
, if you want to
come
here for reading, you should bring your
own
books
due to the fact the coffee shop doesn't have Vietnamese
books
, or you can read a
number
of antique foreign language
books
on the shelves if you are multilingual and interested in them. The café has no loud noise, except a
number
of light music
is played
at a low volume combined with the sound of running water from the fishpond and adequate lighting provides a wonderful relaxing atmosphere.

At present,
because
of the COVID-19 pandemic, all stores ought to close.
Therefore
, I cannot go to my favorite coffee shop and that
makes
me
extremely
sad. In the future, I hope the pandemic will
end
quickly
consequently
that on the weekend or after around-the-clock hours, I will go there in order to release pressure
as well
as chat with my close friends after stressful school days or find like-minded
people
.
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IELTS essay a place where I’m able to relax or let my hair down

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
327 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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