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a place of natural beauty

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Well when it comes to this question, my first option obviously is the Ho Tay Lake, which located in Tay Ho district. This lake is very special because you can see the whole duration of the sunset in the afternoon with a peacful feelling. it is 5. 3 kilometers square, a very huge lake put in the middle of Tay Ho square. Around the lake, there are a lot of trees and some place for people to relax and enjoy the view It is my first choice whenever I feel depress or anxiety with some problems I have to handle.
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IELTS essay a place of natural beauty

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
100 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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