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A memberable in your life

A memberable in your life E70jR
Back in 2020, I was studying for the university entrance exam at the time. The University Entrance Exam is extremely important to my future success. Because the exam'smaterial was so large, I had to not only go to school on a regular basis, but also enroll in extra classes. To put it another way, I went to school from 7 a. m. to 9 p. m. My parents, on the other hand, were really supportive and kind, which encouraged me to push myself more and try harder. That’s why this is a very memorable event of my life.
Back in 2020, I was studying for the university entrance exam at the time. The University Entrance Exam is
extremely
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important
to my future success.
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Because
the exam'
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smaterial
was
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so
large, I had to not
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only
go to school on a regular basis,
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but
also
enroll in extra classes. To put it another way, I went to school from 7 a. m. to 9 p. m. My parents,
on the other hand
, were
really
supportive and kind, which encouraged me to push myself more and try harder. That’s why this is a
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very
memorable
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event
of my life.
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IELTS essay A memberable in your life

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
98 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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