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A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. unfortunately tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not manage correctly. describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world?

In concurrent era, Nowadays exploration is principal of income and country depend on tourism. However they manage properly can ensure become a danger but can also lead to certain drawbacks. The most significant benefit to relying on managing is affected by the economy and i think they manage better. As we can clean the exploration so tourist of other country can visit again and again it is the best way to tourism. This is probably most evident when it can strong our economy and so that our country become a strong and never depend on other country such as trading and stock exchange. Another positive side is we clearly rely on income when country make good infrastructure and give more opportunity to needy human. On the other hand, There are also disadvantages to sometime exploration come in our country and they don't maintain our rule so it may bring a troubled. As a result it seem difficult when they copy our tourism and they bring their culture and rarely they don't understand our tradition level. Evenworse revenue is not principal in every situation many times its a natural beauty. take, for example different places don't make tourism places because of some palace some historical place are only seen our country's people although its our cultural and we don't lose anymore. To conclude, while our nation may strick the rules and don't entry those who don't live in our nation. they have also deal to downside break the rules and our culture is so good therefore I suggest maintain it properly.
In concurrent era, Nowadays exploration is principal of income and
country
depend on
tourism
.
However
they manage
properly
can ensure become a
danger
but
can
also
lead to certain drawbacks. The most significant benefit to relying on managing is
affected
by the economy and
i
think
they manage better. As we can clean the exploration
so
tourist of other
country
can visit again and again it is the best way to
tourism
. This is
probably
most evident when it
can strong
our economy and
so
that our
country
become a strong and never depend on other
country
such as trading and stock exchange. Another
positive
side is we
clearly
rely on income when
country
make
good
infrastructure and give more opportunity to needy human.
On the other hand
, There are
also
disadvantages to sometime exploration
come in
our
country and
they
don't
maintain our
rule
so
it may bring
a troubled
.
As a result
it
seem
difficult when they copy our
tourism and
they bring their culture and rarely they
don't
understand our tradition level.
Evenworse
revenue is not principal in every situation
many
times
its
a natural beauty.
take
,
for example
different
places
don't
make
tourism
places
because
of
some
palace
some
historical place are
only
seen
our country's
people
although
its
our
cultural and
we
don't
lose anymore.
To conclude
, while our nation may
strick
the
rules
and
don't
entry those who
don't
live
in our nation.
they
have
also
deal
to downside break the
rules
and our culture is
so
good
therefore
I suggest maintain it
properly
.
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IELTS essay A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. unfortunately tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not manage correctly. describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world?

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