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People often choose the beach as a place of entertainment

People often choose the beach as a place of entertainment 7LE62

People often choose the beach as a place of entertainment. The beach is a good place to relax because we can sit in the sand with your family and hear the waves rushing in and out. You also enjoy the fresh air and seafood too. people often come here to sunbath, swimming and immerse theirself in nature. We can see the beautiful little shells with our own eyes, collect and bring them home. The atmosphere in here make we feel comfortable, relax and forget tired

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often
 choose the beach as a place of entertainment. The beach is a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
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often
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 in nature. We can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
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beautiful
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little
 shells with our This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
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 eyes, collect and bring them home. The atmosphere in here This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
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