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A large industrial township is planned near your town. Would you support or oppose this plan? Discuss with reasons and examples.

A large industrial township is planned near your town. Would you support or oppose this plan? Discuss with reasons and examples. mX7xL
Townships are usually mini cities on the outskirts of the big cities. It offer all the necessary facilities like housing, education, health care, work place, shopping. I really don't like building large townships in my village because, though it has lot's of advantages it disturbed our towns natural, peaceful and calm environment. But it could benefit many people in our town by offering employment opportunities to many people in the town, it improve transport and infrastructure, it promote water facilities, health and education facilities can also improve. If we buy a flat in the township it might be more advantageous and we can happily enjoy all the facilities out there. But the cost of flat in a town is 10-15% higher than a flat in the apartment. At the end of the month the billing will be higher in the township. We should also pay maintenance charges in a township which is also more costlier. But the security in a township is an added advantage for the persons who have younger children and older people at homes. There will be enhanced lifestyle in a township with all the available facilities. Better return of investment also available more easily in a township. Apart from high expensive it is good to have a flat in township. But, I personally oppose township in our town because, it distrub our environment. Construction takes a long time which will add noise and air pollution and cutting down trees for township construction can lead to global warming. Affects people health in the town, so I oppose industrial township construction. Since my childhood I was living here, so I don't want some construction to disturb our routine peaceful environment.
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usually
mini cities on the outskirts of the
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cities. It
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offer
all the necessary facilities like housing, education, health care, work place, shopping. I
really
don't like building large
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townships
in my village
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because
, though it has
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lot's
of advantages it disturbed our
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towns
natural, peaceful and calm environment.
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But
it could benefit
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many
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people
in our
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town
by offering employment opportunities to
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many
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people
in the
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town
, it
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improve
transport and infrastructure, it
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promote
water facilities, health and education facilities can
also
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improve
. If we
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buy
a
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flat
in the
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township
it might be more
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advantageous and
we can
happily
enjoy all the facilities out there.
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the cost of
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flat
in a
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town
is 10-15% higher than a
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flat
in the apartment. At the
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end
of the month the billing will be higher in the
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township
. We should
also
pay maintenance charges in a
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township
which is
also
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more costlier
.
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But
the security in a
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township
is an
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added
advantage for the persons who have younger children and older
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people
at homes. There will
be enhanced
lifestyle in a
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township
with all the available facilities. Better return of investment
also
available more
easily
in a
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township
. Apart from high expensive it is
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good
to have a
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flat
in
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township
.
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, I
personally
oppose
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township
in our
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town
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because
, it
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distrub
our environment.
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Construction
takes a long time which will
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add
noise and air pollution and cutting down trees for
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township
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construction
can lead to global warming. Affects
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people
health in the
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town
,
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so
I oppose industrial
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township
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construction
. Since my childhood I was living here,
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so
I don't want
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some
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construction
to disturb our routine peaceful environment.
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IELTS essay A large industrial township is planned near your town. Would you support or oppose this plan? Discuss with reasons and examples.

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