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A Job is considered essential in all adult life to meet their basic needs. Most people spend the majority o

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A Job is considered essential in all adult life to meet their basic needs. Most people spend the majority of their lives at work for earning. Therefore, many people believe that job satisfaction is extremely necessary in order to have a quality of life. In this essay, I would discuss the factors that contribute to job satisfaction and it’s reality in the further paragraphs. Discussing the factors, there are many elements that are considered vital for work satisfaction such as, salary, workplace environment, recognition, relationship with co-workers, and pressure. All employers have expectations with their organisation regarding recognition of their hard work and salary increment which should be made accordingly. For instance, if a person works continuously for an organisation but the company is not giving credit then he/she might leave that company because of job dissatisfaction. If a company gives a lot of pressure to workers then it may affect their quality of work that they could provide. Dream job is something where they get all the mentioned factors fulfilled. Focusing on the reality, in today’s world, because of the growing population there is competition among people to get a job. So, the majority of people are not looking for their dream job, instead they just want to be employed. People with higher qualifications are sitting at home because of the scarcity in the job sector. Individuals are satisfied with their job even though they are not paid enough based on their qualifications. To conclude, nowadays, it is immensely difficult to define job satisfaction because of the current situation that people are facing. Public has to live with the options that they have been provided.
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is considered
essential in all adult life to
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meet
their basic needs. Most
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people
spend the majority of their
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lives
at
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work
for earning.
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,
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many
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people
believe that
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job
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satisfaction
is
extremely
necessary in order to have a quality of life. In this essay, I would discuss the factors that contribute to
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job
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satisfaction
and it’s reality in the
further
paragraphs.

Discussing the factors, there are
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many
elements that
are considered
vital for
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work
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satisfaction
such as, salary, workplace environment, recognition, relationship with co-workers, and pressure. All employers have expectations with their
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organisation
regarding recognition of their
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hard
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work
and salary increment which should
be made
accordingly
.
For instance
, if a person works
continuously
for an
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organisation
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but
the
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company
is not giving credit then he/she might
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that
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company
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because
of
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job
dissatisfaction. If a
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company
gives
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a lot of
pressure to workers then it may affect their quality of
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work
that they could provide. Dream
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job
is something where they
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get
all the mentioned factors fulfilled.

Focusing on the reality, in
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today
’s world,
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because
of the growing population there is competition among
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people
to
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get
a
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job
.
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So
, the majority of
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people
are not looking for their dream
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job
,
instead
they
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just
want to
be employed
.
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People
with higher qualifications are sitting at home
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because
of the scarcity in the
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job
sector. Individuals
are satisfied
with their
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job
even though
they are not paid
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enough
based on their qualifications.

To conclude
, nowadays, it is
immensely
difficult to define
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job
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satisfaction
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because
of the
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current
situation that
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people
are facing. Public
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has to
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live
with the options that they have
been provided
.
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IELTS essay A Job is considered essential in all adult life to meet their basic needs. Most people spend the majority o

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
276 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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