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A hunffi yeorc ogo, peop,e think thol humon roce is sleodily imgoving in every oreo of life. Now if seems fhis is nol cerloin in lhot sifuolbn. tn which oreos do you think we hove mode imporllonl progress nowadoys? ln which oreos do you think we slill need fo moke progress?

A hunffi yeorc ogo, peop, e think thol humon roce is sleodily imgoving in every oreo of life. Now if seems fhis is nol cerloin in lhot sifuolbn. tn which oreos do you think we hove mode imporllonl progress nowadoys? ln which oreos do you think we slill need fo moke progress? 1BoW
h b irrefrrtable d|at $e world we live in today has changed beyond recognizable limits to what it was a hundred years Go. h has all been possible due to the growth of science and technology. This essay shall bok into sod€ areas in which we have made progress and the areas in which we still have a lot to do. let l, s first corlsik the growth in medical science. We have discovered newer cures and medicines for many diseres. urhich were earlier considered untreatable. Even the surgical techniques adopted today are safur and qui*er. Organ transplantation surgeries have given life to many. Furthermore, there have been revolutionary developments in the transport and communication sector. Air travel has becone safer and faster. Road and rail transport have also achieved newer heights. Communbtirn tedrrrclogy has shrunk the planet Earth to a global village. People are now constantly in toudt wift eadl other through the mobile phone and the lnternet. The lnternet is an ocean of knowledge. Even the nnnufacturing technology has made mass production available and everything is available to enerlore in all orners of the world. Hou€ter, there are still many sectors where we have to work further. Treatments for many types of cancers ard AttlS have yet to be found. Alternative sources of energy have yet to be widely recognized and adopted. Ways to reduce pollution, and thus put a halt to Blobal warming have yet to be found. Many frofitiefs d outer space have yet to be explored. Effective ways to destroy nuclear waste have yet to be devebped- To condude, we have rmde a lot of progress in the last hundred years but there are still many areas in rtrirjr ue hare to wo* further.
h
b
irrefrrtable
d|at
$e
world we
live
in
today
has
changed
beyond recognizable limits to what it was a hundred years Go. h has all been possible due to the growth of science and technology. This essay shall
bok
into
sod€
areas in which we have made progress and the areas in which we
still
have a lot to do.

let
l, s
first
corlsik
the growth in medical science. We have discovered newer cures and medicines for
many
diseres
.
urhich
were earlier considered untreatable. Even the surgical techniques adopted
today
are
safur
and qu
i*e
r. Organ transplantation surgeries have
given
life to
many
.

Furthermore
, there have been revolutionary developments in the transport and communication sector. Air travel has
becone
safer and faster. Road and rail transport have
also
achieved newer heights.
Communbtirn
tedrrrclogy
has shrunk the planet Earth to a global village.
People
are
now
constantly
in
toudt
wift
eadl
other through the mobile phone and the
lnternet
. The
lnternet
is an ocean of knowledge. Even the
nnnufacturing
technology has made mass production available and everything is available to
enerlore
in all
orners
of the world.

Hou€ter
, there are
still
many
sectors where we
have to
work
further
. Treatments for
many
types of cancers
ard
AttlS
have
yet
to
be found
. Alternative sources of energy have
yet
to be
widely
recognized and adopted. Ways to
reduce
pollution, and
thus
put a halt to
Blobal
warming have
yet
to
be found
.
Many
frofitiefs
d outer space have
yet
to
be explored
. Effective ways to
destroy
nuclear waste have
yet
to be
devebped
-

To
condude
, we have
rmde
a lot of
progress in the last hundred years
but
there are
still
many
areas in
rtrirjr
ue
hare to
wo
*
further
.
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IELTS essay A hunffi yeorc ogo, peop, e think thol humon roce is sleodily imgoving in every oreo of life. Now if seems fhis is nol cerloin in lhot sifuolbn. tn which oreos do you think we hove mode imporllonl progress nowadoys? ln which oreos do you think we slill need fo moke progress?

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