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A house or apartment I would like to live

A house or apartment I would like to live GLxW2

I’ve been asked to talk about a house or apartment I’d like to live in As a matter of fact I’ve never lived in a house I was born and I’ve been growing up in the apartment as you know due to the industrialization of cities and increase Of population majority of people are getting used to living in apartments besides as far as security is concerned flats are better choices you know less crimes are being committed in the apartments Despite these I’d Rather leave in a great house And I’d like it to be located in a mountainous area in Switzerland I haven’t met my dream house anywhere but in my imagination Had I managed to have it I’d have become prized possession I would have had a lot in my plate there I could cook I could read I could enjoy spectacular sceneries Which can be seen through the window Thanking about my home mates they might Have been my family friends or anyone who we can get along well All in all since such house Would cater for all my expectations I will try my best to own it

I’ve been asked
 to talk about a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
house
 or apartment I’d like to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 in

As a matter of fact I’ve never This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resided
lived
 in a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house


I was born
 and I’ve been growing up in the apartment

as you know due to the industrialization of cities and increase Of population majority of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 are getting This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to living in apartments besides
 as far as security is concerned
 flats are better choices you know Did you mean "fewer"? The noun crimes is countable.fewer
less
 crimes are being committed
 in the apartments

Despite these I’d Rather
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :depart
leave
 in a great You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
house
 And I’d like it to be located
 in a mountainous area in Switzerland

I haven’t met my dream You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
house
 anywhere This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 in my imagination

Had I managed to have it I’d have become prized possession

I would have had a lot in my plate there I could cook I could read I could enjoy spectacular sceneries Which can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 through the window

Thanking about my home mates they might Have been my family friends or anyone who we can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 along well

All in all since such You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
house
 Would cater for all my expectations I will try my best to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 it