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A healthy person is often described as someone who has a good diet, gets plenty of exercise and avoids stress. What should people do to stay healthy in your country? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

A healthy person is often described as someone who has a good diet, gets plenty of exercise and avoids stress. What should people do to stay healthy in your country? K7XN
A healthy man keeps a healthy vision and thoughts. Therefore, an individual should maintain a good diet along with an ample amount of physical workouts and ignore the stress. This essay will discuss how my country is taking measures to tackle the unhealthy situation and to stay fit. Considering the reason for lack of physical exercise is no work-life balance. People need to start prioritizing mental and physical health which will help them to give enough time for physical activity which will help them to stay fit. For example, due to the recent COVID-19 situation, many employees are working from home which they are also utilizing for indulging in physical activities to stay active while staying at home. All these not only help them to keep in shape but also helps to reduce the work stress. The secondary is the absence of nutritional food daily. Many citizens don't have access to or have knowledge about the importance of healthy food but this can help out by educating them and helping them with alternative cheaper options which can be used in day-to-day meal preparation. For example, during the current situation of pandemic people had limited supply of food so many chefs and cooking channels came up with ideas and showed the audience how healthy food can be prepared with less ingredients. In nutshell, everyone can have a stress-free life along with good food and health. But it all depends on how well people are self-disciplined and self-aware about the importance of good health and food in our day-to-day lifestyle.
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man
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a
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healthy
vision and thoughts.
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, an individual should maintain a
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good
diet along with an ample amount of
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physical
workouts and
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ignore
the
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stress
. This essay will discuss how my country is taking measures to tackle the unhealthy situation and to stay fit.

Considering the reason for lack of
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physical
exercise is no work-life balance.
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People
need to
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start
prioritizing mental and
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physical
health which will
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help
them to give
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enough
time for
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physical
activity which will
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help
them to stay fit.
For example
, due to the recent COVID-19 situation,
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many
employees are working from home which they are
also
utilizing for indulging in
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physical
activities to stay active while staying at home. All these not
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help
them to
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in shape
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also
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the work
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stress
.

The secondary is the absence of nutritional
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food
daily.
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Many
citizens don't have access to or have knowledge about the importance of
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healthy
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food
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but
this can
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help
out by educating them and helping them with alternative cheaper options which can be
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used
in day-to-day meal preparation.
For example
, during the
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current
situation of pandemic
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people
had limited supply of
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food
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so
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many
chefs and cooking channels came up with
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ideas
and
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showed
the audience how
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healthy
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food
can
be prepared
with
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less
ingredients.

In nutshell, everyone can have a
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stress
-free life along with
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good
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food
and health.
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it all depends on how well
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people
are self-disciplined and self-aware about the importance of
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good
health and
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food
in our day-to-day lifestyle.
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IELTS essay A healthy person is often described as someone who has a good diet, gets plenty of exercise and avoids stress. What should people do to stay healthy in your country?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
258 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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