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a healthy person is often described as someone who has a good diet, gets plenty of exercise and avoids stress.

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It is indeed necessary to stay healthy and safe by following a balanced diet with regular exercise and reduced stress. Staying fit not only induces good health but it helps improve overall immunity to diseases, enlightens mood and agility, and increases life expectancy. There are various techniques to be fit and I am going to discuss some of those methods in this essay. Over the past 20 years, India has seen an exponential growth of the packaged foods and junk foods such as Pizzas, pasta and burgers. Consumption of junk food deteriorates health as it contains harmful trans-fat and high calories which in-turn gets accumulated in the body as belly fat. The recent trend shows that the Indians are now accelerating away from these fatty foods and adopting homemade delicacies. Such adoption has not only marked the start of a healthy lifestyle but also brought the family togetherness. Sports is another way to lead a healthy lifestyle. Indians are known for playing cricket and football. But due to the technological advancements in a wide range of computer and mobile games, stressful working environments, untrust, and the effect of the recent pandemic, Indians are moving away from sports. Indulging in any kind of sports is advantageous for improving physical, mental health, controlling adrenaline and tactics. To conclude, people who want to switch from an unhealthy lifestyle to a healthy lifestyle should change their eating habits, especially reducing the intake of junk foods and other packaged foods and doing physical exercise to stay happy. As it is said that "Health is Wealth" so everyone should take care of it.
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indeed
necessary to stay
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healthy
and safe by following a balanced diet with regular exercise and
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reduced
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stress
. Staying fit not
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induces
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good
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health
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it
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helps
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improve
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immunity to diseases, enlightens mood and agility, and increases life expectancy. There are various techniques to be
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fit and
I am going to discuss
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of those methods in this essay.

Over the past 20 years, India has
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seen
an exponential growth of the packaged
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foods
and junk
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foods
such as Pizzas, pasta and burgers. Consumption of junk
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food
deteriorates
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health
as it contains harmful trans-
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fat
and high calories which in-turn
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gets
accumulated in the body as belly
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fat
. The recent trend
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shows
that the Indians are
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now
accelerating away from these fatty
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foods
and adopting homemade delicacies. Such adoption has not
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only
marked the
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start
of a
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healthy
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lifestyle
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but
also
brought the family togetherness.

Sports is another way to lead a
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healthy
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lifestyle
. Indians
are known
for playing cricket and football.
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due to the technological advancements in a wide
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range of computer
and mobile games, stressful working environments,
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untrust
, and the effect of the recent pandemic, Indians are moving away from sports. Indulging in any kind of sports is advantageous for improving physical, mental
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health
, controlling adrenaline and tactics.

To conclude
,
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people
who want to switch from an unhealthy
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lifestyle
to a
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healthy
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lifestyle
should
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change
their eating habits,
especially
reducing the intake of junk
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foods
and other packaged
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foods
and doing physical exercise to stay happy. As it
is said
that
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Health is Wealth
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IELTS essay a healthy person is often described as someone who has a good diet, gets plenty of exercise and avoids stress.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
267 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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