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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic. Write at least 250 words. A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research. r8Yxm
Nowadays animals are used for various purposes by people, some animals are human's best friend whilst others are real danger to Man. The use of animals is increasing day by day and people try to utilize them in different ways. Due to which an enormous amount of people thinks that animals should not be use so much by human and they should have their own rights just like, at the same time some people thinks that human should use animals to their own comfort level. In this essay a light will be thrown on both views. In a lot of underdeveloped countries and even in some developing countries animals are treated very badly, and they don't have any rights there. Like a few months ago a video got viral on the internet where army of a country used dogs and donkeys as target practice. After this video numerous people started talking about animals right and how animals should be treated. They said that animals should not be used for human satisfactions and should have their own rights as we humans have While other people think that animals are send to this world by God to satisfy our needs, and we should use them in any way that we want. For example in our country bulls are used by farmers in their farms and they take good care of them just because they want them to become strong enough for the work, or some people use dogs for hunting and security reasons. In my opinion both the above views have their own merits and demerits animals can never get rights just like us, as the are made to work for human. On the other hand animals should not be used for human comfort in such a way that animals get hurt. They should have their specific rights and these rights should be implemented everywhere. Awareness campaigns should be run in different parts of the world on animals rights, specially on school levels. Animals are good friends to humans beings and have proved their loyalties time to times in history. Loyalty of dog in given as an example by us so we should show them such loyalty too. This essay discussed both the views by different people and a neutral view is also presented in the end.
Nowadays
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animals
are
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used
for various purposes by
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people
,
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some
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animals
are human's best friend whilst others are real
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danger
to
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Man
. The
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of
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animals
is increasing day by day and
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people
try to utilize them in
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different
ways. Due to which an enormous amount of
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people
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thinks
that
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animals
should not be
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use
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so
much by
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human and
they should have their
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own
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rights
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just
like, at the same time
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some
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people
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thinks
that
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human
should
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use
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animals
to their
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comfort level. In this essay a light will
be thrown
on both views.

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underdeveloped
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countries
and even in
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some
developing
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countries
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animals
are treated
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very
badly
, and they don't have any
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rights
there. Like a few months ago a video
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got
viral on the internet where army of a
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country
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used
dogs and donkeys as target practice. After this video numerous
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people
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started
talking about
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animals
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right
and how
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animals
should
be treated
. They said that
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animals
should not be
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used
for
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human
satisfactions and should have their
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own
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rights
as we
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humans
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have


While other
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people
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think
that
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animals
are
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send
to this world by God to satisfy our needs, and we should
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use
them in any way that we want.
For example
in our
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country
bulls are
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used
by farmers in their
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farms and
they take
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good
care of them
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just
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because
they want them to become strong
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enough
for the work, or
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some
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people
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use
dogs for hunting and security reasons.

In my opinion both the above views have their
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own
merits and demerits
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animals
can never
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get
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rights
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just
like us, as the
are made
to work for
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human
.
On the other hand
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animals
should not be
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used
for
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human
comfort in such a way that
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animals
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get
hurt. They should have their specific
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rights
and these
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rights
should
be implemented
everywhere. Awareness campaigns should
be run
in
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different
parts of the world on
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animals
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rights
,
specially
on school levels.

Animals are
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good
friends to
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humans beings
and have proved their loyalties time to times in history. Loyalty of dog in
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given
as an example by us
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so
we should
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show
them such loyalty too. This essay discussed both the views by
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different
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people
and a neutral view is
also
presented in the
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end
.
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IELTS essay A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research.

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385 words
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