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A government’s role is only to provide defence capability and urban infrastructure (roads, water supplies, etc.). All other services (education, health, social security) should be provided by private groups or individuals in the community. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

A government’s role is only to provide defence capability and urban infrastructure (roads, water supplies, etc. ). All other services (education, health, social security) should be provided by private groups or individuals in the community. w2Dr
It is an controversial topic these days, there are many public facilities which operated by government. It is very common way to provide infrastructure however several persons insists on personal and private groups should operate other services. They believe that it has more high quality of service than government one. As I mentioned, it is normal to provide service by government, it is operating very clearly and fair because the government control this system, and we can prevent to corruption of personal organization by control of government. For example the roads is immensely expensive to build up thus normally government handling this system by using tax. So it tends to more fair, and we can use these systems for free. Otherwise, there are people who insist on that the capability and urban infrastructure which operating by government is low quality therefore we should more distributing power to individuals and private groups which is more professional however it has potential of corruption, because we don't really know that where money come from and some people are trying to use money personally. therefore, it could be unfair by operating individuals. to sum up, it is hard to prevent to corruption, If it operates by individuals. However, it is more fair and will be able to see where money come from when the government deal with system thus, I would say we should rely on government when it comes to important system for citizen.
It is
an
controversial topic these days, there are
many
public facilities which operated by
government
. It is
very
common way to provide infrastructure
however
several persons insists on personal and private groups should operate other services. They believe that it has more high quality of service than
government
one.

As I mentioned, it is normal to provide service by
government
, it is operating
very
clearly
and
fair
because
the
government
control this
system
, and we can
prevent
to corruption of personal organization by control of
government
.
For example
the roads is
immensely
expensive to build up
thus
normally
government
handling this
system
by using tax.
So
it tends to more
fair
, and we can
use
these
systems
for free.

Otherwise
, there are
people
who insist on that the capability and urban infrastructure which operating by
government
is low quality
therefore
we should more distributing power to individuals and private groups which is more professional
however
it has potential of corruption,
because
we don't
really
know that where money
come
from and
some
people
are trying to
use
money
personally
.
therefore
, it could be unfair by operating individuals.

to
sum up, it is
hard
to
prevent
to corruption, If it operates by individuals.
However
, it is more
fair
and will be able to
see
where money
come
from when the
government
deal with
system
thus
, I would say we should rely on
government
when it
comes
to
important
system
for citizen.
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IELTS essay A government’s role is only to provide defence capability and urban infrastructure (roads, water supplies, etc. ). All other services (education, health, social security) should be provided by private groups or individuals in the community.

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