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A friend of yours needs extra help with schoolwork. You have good knowledge of the subject that your friend needs help with. Is it better for your friend to get help from you or from a professional tutor? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

A friend of yours needs extra help with schoolwork. You have good knowledge of the subject that your friend needs help with. Is it better for your friend to get help from you or from a professional tutor? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. xmYk1
Nowadays, many students are suffering from schoolwork. They have to spend a lot of extra time to finish these works. Recently, there is a heated debate about whether is it better for your friend to get help from you or from a professional tutor when you have good knowledge of the subjects that your friend needs help with. Some people believe that professional tutors are always the best. From where I stand, we both can get benefits if I can help my friend with his schoolwork. First and foremost, he can save a lot of money without hiring professional tutors. The ultimate goal for my friend is to finish the work, which is hard for him to achieve by himself. It is also a general fact that hiring tutors today can cost a great amount of money. Although these tutors can be much more professional with the schoolwork than I do, my friend still needs to finish these works by himself. It is unnecessary for him to spend money on some tutors that he does not need. However, my friend can easily do his homework with the help of mine and meantime save a lot of money. Instead of spending money on tutors for some tedious schoolwork, money can be used to relax. In short, I can help my friend save money and help him finish his work. In addition, our friendship can be evaluated if I can help him overcome this difficulty. As we all know, a friend in need is a friend indeed. Friendship is the most valuable thing to me. In order to make our bonding become stronger, I will try my best to help him with his work. However, all this needs me to take some effects. By contrast, If I just leave him alone without helping him. Our friendship will come to an end. Compared to that circumstance, I would rather help him to face difficulties and grow at same time. In fact, with my help, both of us can learn many things. As for me, my knowledge for this subject is more skilled and our bonding is becoming stronger and stronger. Therefore, friendship can be enhanced if I teach my friend. It is sure that having a professional tutor can solve this problem easily. They can solve all these homework questions by telling my friend answers. It seems like they solve problems in a much quicker way, but my friend can learn nothing. When this unhealthy habit is developed, whenever a problem is encountered, friend only need to pay tutor instead of thinking for himself. But with my help, although I will not directly tell my friend the answer, I will guide him until he can solve these problems by himself. My help not only helped him save money, but our friendship also improved. This approach helped all of us.
Nowadays,
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many
students are suffering from schoolwork. They
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have to
spend
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finish
these works. Recently, there is a heated debate about whether is it better for your
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friend
to
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get
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help
from you or from a
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professional
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tutor
when you have
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good
knowledge of the subjects that your
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friend
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needs
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help
with.
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Some
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people
believe that
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professional
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tutors
are always the best. From where I stand, we both can
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get
benefits if I can
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help
my
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friend
with his schoolwork.

First
and foremost, he can
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save
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a lot of
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money
without hiring
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professional
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tutors
. The ultimate goal for my
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friend
is to
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finish
the
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work
, which is
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hard
for him to achieve by himself. It is
also
a general fact that hiring
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tutors
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today
can cost a great amount of
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money
. Although these
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tutors
can be much more
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professional
with the schoolwork than I do, my
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friend
still
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needs
to
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finish
these works by himself. It is unnecessary for him to spend
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money
on
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some
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tutors
that he does not
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need
.
However
, my
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friend
can
easily
do his homework with the
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help
of mine and meantime
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save
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a lot of
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money
.
Instead
of spending
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money
on
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tutors
for
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some
tedious schoolwork,
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money
can be
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used
to relax. In short, I can
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help
my
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friend
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save
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money
and
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help
him
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finish
his work.

In addition
, our
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friendship
can
be evaluated
if I can
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help
him overcome this difficulty. As we all know, a
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friend
in
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need
is a
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friend
indeed
.
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Friendship
is the most valuable thing to me. In order to
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make
our bonding become stronger, I will try my best to
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help
him with his
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work
.
However
, all this
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needs
me to take
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some
effects. By contrast, If I
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just
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leave
him alone without helping him. Our
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friendship
will
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come
to an
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end
. Compared to that circumstance, I would
rather
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help
him to face difficulties and grow at same time. In fact, with my
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help
, both of us can learn
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many
things. As for me, my knowledge for this subject is more skilled and our bonding is becoming stronger and stronger.
Therefore
,
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friendship
can
be enhanced
if I teach my friend.

In English, people don't say 'it is sure'. They say, 'it is certain that'. Did you mean "it is certain"?
It is sure
that having a
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professional
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tutor
can
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solve
this
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problem
easily
. They can
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all these homework questions by telling my
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friend
answers. It seems like they
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problems
in a much quicker way,
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but
my
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friend
can learn nothing. When this unhealthy habit
is developed
, whenever a
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problem
is encountered
,
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friend
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need
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instead
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, although I will not
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tell
my
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the answer, I will guide him until he can
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solve
these
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problems
by himself. My
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help
not
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helped
him
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,
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our
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also
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improved
. This approach
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helped
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IELTS essay A friend of yours needs extra help with schoolwork. You have good knowledge of the subject that your friend needs help with. Is it better for your friend to get help from you or from a professional tutor? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
476 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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