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A friend of your is thinking of going on a camping holidays for the first time. He/she has asked for your advice. • Explain why you think your friend will enjoy camping holidays • Describe some possible disadvantages. • Say you would like to go

I’m writing in response to your recent letter in which you asked me about camping. I would say that camping is a good idea to see natural beauty closely.  The only thing I’m concerned about is the time you have chosen for this camping. I really want to go camping with you. At camping, you’ll at chance see the real mother nature like peaceful environment, fresh air and water, colorful flowers and much more. Apart from this, you’ll get a break from your regular life which will definitely help you to refresh your mind. I would suggest that you should go camping in April or May instead of July because it'll be too hot at that time. Due to the high temperature, you’ll get tired/dehydrated soon and can’t enjoy your camping. It would be a great pleasure for me if you would allow me to join you for the camping. I was planning for camping for a long time but didn’t get a chance to go because of my busy schedule.  Yours truly,
I’m writing in response to your recent letter in which you asked me about camping. I would say that camping is a
good
idea
to
see
natural beauty
closely
.  The
only
thing I’m concerned about is the time you have chosen for this camping. I
really
want to go camping with you. At camping, you’ll at chance
see
the real mother nature like peaceful environment, fresh air and water, colorful flowers and much more. Apart from this, you’ll
get
a break from your regular life which will definitely
help
you to refresh your mind. I would suggest that you should go camping in April or May
instead
of July
because
it'll be too hot at that time. Due to the high temperature, you’ll
get
tired/dehydrated
soon
and can’t enjoy your camping. It would be a great pleasure for me if you would
allow
me to
join
you for the camping. I was planning for camping for a long time
but
didn’t
get
a chance to go
because
of my busy schedule.  Yours
truly
,
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IELTS essay A friend of your is thinking of going on a camping holidays for the first time. He/she has asked for your advice. • Explain why you think your friend will enjoy camping holidays • Describe some possible disadvantages. • Say you would like to go

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