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A farmer was live in a village.

A farmer was live in a village. GNJ3o
A farmer was live in a village. He has four sons. They always fight each other. Seeing this the old farmer was upset and think what will be happened after my death. One day he collected some woods. Some left without binding and some tied together. Then he called his children and hand over them some wood and told them to break that. All of them broke their woods. After that, he gave them wood which was tied up. Nobody could break that woods. Then he told them “separate wood was weak. That’s why you broke them easily. Together it became strong and nobody can break them. In the same way, if you guys live unite. No, any enemy can harm you. If you live separate you will be weak and anybody can hurt you. Children liked their father’s advice. They promised they will live unite and always help each other. A farmer was live in a village. He has four sons. They always fight each other. Seeing this the old farmer was upset and think what will be happened after my death. One day he collected some woods. Some left without binding and some tied together. Then he called his children and hand over them some wood and told them to break that. All of them broke their woods. After that, he gave them wood which was tied up. Nobody could break that woods. Then he told them “separate wood was weak. That’s why you broke them easily. Together it became strong and nobody can break them. In the same way, if you guys live unite. No, any enemy can harm you. If you live separate you will be weak and anybody can hurt you. Children liked their father’s advice. They promised they will live unite and always help each other.
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in a village. He has four sons. They always fight each other. Seeing this the
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farmer
was upset
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after my death.

One day he collected
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woods.
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Some
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left
without binding and
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tied
together. Then he called his children and hand over them
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some
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wood
and
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break
that. All of them
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broke
their woods. After that, he gave them
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wood
which was
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tied
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Nobody
could
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break
that woods. Then he
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told
them
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“separate
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wood
was
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weak
. That’s why you
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broke
them
easily
. Together it became strong and
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nobody
can
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break
them.
In the same way
, if you guys
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live
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unite
. No, any enemy can harm you. If you
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live
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separate
you will be
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weak
and anybody can hurt you.

Children liked their father’s advice. They promised they will
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live
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unite
and always
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help
each other.

A
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farmer
was
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live
in a village. He has four sons. They always fight each other. Seeing this the
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
old
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
farmer
was upset
and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
what will
be happened
after my death.

One day he collected
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some
woods.
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Some
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left
without binding and
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some
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tied
together. Then he called his children and hand over them
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
wood
and
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told
them to
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break
that. All of them
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
broke
their woods. After that, he gave them
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
wood
which was
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
tied
up.
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Nobody
could
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break
that woods. Then he
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
told
them
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
“separate
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
wood
was
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
weak
. That’s why you
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broke
them
easily
. Together it became strong and
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nobody
can
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break
them.
In the same way
, if you guys
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live
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
unite
. No, any enemy can harm you. If you
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
live
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
separate
you will be
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
weak
and anybody can hurt you.

Children liked their father’s advice. They promised they will
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
live
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
unite
and always
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
each other.
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IELTS essay A farmer was live in a village.

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
302 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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