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A DAY IN THE DESERT-PARAGGRAPHS

A DAY IN THE DESERT-PARAGGRAPHS 30qaN

Last week, I went with my family to Jubail dessert. It was raining when we reached. We played volleyball and we rented motorcycles to ride it and we had fun. Then, We cooked Kabsa and It was delicious. After that we talked and drunk some coffee. When we came back to the home, our car stock on the quick sand. We had a difficult time but also we enjoyed with those consequences. The sum of, we had a memorable trip

Last week, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accompanied
went with
 my family to Possible spelling mistake found.Jubal
Jubail
 dessert. It was raining when we reached. We played Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).volleyball, and
volleyball and
 we rented motorcycles to ride Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).it, and
it and
 we had fun. Then, We cooked Possible spelling mistake found.KansasNASALabsBSAKabulKarma
Kabsa
 and It was delicious. After that we talked and drunk This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 coffee. When we came back to the home, our car stock on the quick sand. We had a difficult time This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
 we enjoyed with those consequences. The sum of, we had a memorable Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphtrip.trip!trip?trip:trip,trip;
trip