In current hectic society, many parents spend the vast majority of their time by working, thus they cannot allot enough time to their offsprings. As a consequence, some people think it is a reliable alternative to trust grandparents to take care of their children, whereas others opine that the best option is childcare centres.
On the one hand, care taking is one of the most salient parts of an infant's growth and can be well undertaken by other family members like grandparents or uncle and aunt. It is also indisputable that the upbringing of a child under grandparents is highly rich in cultural, traditional and ritual parts. The kids are grown up under their grandparents have more respect to their family and relatives, hence the responsibility taking of children under blood relatives is highly beneficial in order to strengthen and enhance family relationships between kids and other family members.
On the other hand, the manifest boons of child care centres cannot also be refuted. First and foremost, the professionals in these places have required qualifications to bring up a child, therefore it is more effortless for them to ascertain both mental and physical problems of kids. Furthermore, in these centres, children have a lot of opportunities to socialize and hone their communication skills by interacting with each other. For example, kids from various nationalities can easily gain knowledge about one another's culture by communicating in these centres which, in turn, would make them a more intelligent person in the future.
In conclusion, although there are some obvious edges of children being raised by their own family members, I believe it is a better choice to send them to centres that provides superior upbringing of children.
In
current
hectic society,
many
parents spend the vast majority of their time by working,
thus
they cannot allot
enough
time to their
offsprings
. As a consequence,
some
people
think
it is a reliable alternative to trust
grandparents
to take care of their
children
, whereas others opine that the best option is childcare
centres
.
On the one hand, care taking is one of the most salient parts of an infant's growth and can be well undertaken by
other
family
members like
grandparents
or uncle and aunt. It is
also
indisputable that the upbringing of a child under
grandparents
is
highly
rich in cultural, traditional and ritual parts. The
kids
are grown
up under their
grandparents
have more respect to their
family
and relatives,
hence
the responsibility taking of
children
under blood relatives is
highly
beneficial in order to strengthen and enhance
family
relationships between
kids
and
other
family
members.
On the
other
hand, the manifest boons of child care
centres
cannot
also
be refuted
.
First
and foremost, the professionals in these places have required qualifications to bring up a child,
therefore
it is more effortless for them to ascertain both mental and physical problems of
kids
.
Furthermore
, in these
centres
,
children
have
a lot of
opportunities to socialize and hone their communication
skills
by interacting with each
other
.
For example
,
kids
from various nationalities can
easily
gain knowledge about one another's culture by communicating in these
centres
which, in turn, would
make
them a more intelligent person in the future.
In conclusion
, although there are
some
obvious edges of
children
being raised
by their
own
family
members, I believe it is a better choice to
send
them to
centres
that provides superior upbringing of
children
.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes