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A cashless society has become more popular recently because an increased number of people likes to purchase through electronic transactions, instead of paying cash. In my view, although paying through cards is safe and convenient, the invasion of privacy and overdraft consumption will be a big issue.

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I submitted my passport application on 8/1/2021 and status showed pending for physical police varification after few days status changed to your application is under review at Regional Passport Office then on 11/2/2021 status changed to Police Verification Report is not clear and application is under review at Regional Passport Office and on 12/2/2021 I visited RPO Ahmedabad and applied for reverification and now on 19/2/2021 status show same as Police Verification Report is not clear and application is under review at Regional Passport Office. I submitted my passport application on 8/1/2021 and status showed pending for physical police verification after few day's status changed to your application is under review at Regional Passport Office then on 11/2/2021 status changed to Police Verification Report is not clear and application is under review at Regional Passport Office and on 12/2/2021 I visited RPO Ahmedabad and applied for reverification and now on 19/2/2021 status show same as Police Verification Report is not clear and application is under review at Regional Passport Office. I submitted my passport application on 8/1/2021 and status showed pending for physical police varification after few days' status changed to your application is under review at Regional Passport Office then on 11/2/2021 status changed to Police Verification Report is not clear and application is under review at Regional Passport Office and on 12/2/2021 I visited RPO Ahmedabad and applied for reverification and now on 19/2/2021 status show same as Police Verification Report is not clear and application is under review at Regional Passport Office. I submitted my passport application on 8/1/2021 and status showed pending for physical police varification after few day's status changed to your application is under review at Regional Passport Office then on 11/2/2021 status changed to Police Verification Report is not clear and application is under review at Regional Passport Office and on 12/2/2021 I visited RPO Ahmedabad and applied for reverification and now on 19/2/2021 status show same as Police Verification Report is not clear and application is under review at Regional Passport Office. I submitted my passport application on 8/1/2021 and status showed pending for physical police varification after few days status changed to your application is under review at Regional Passport Office then on 11/2/2021 status changed to Police Verification Report is not clear and application is under review at Regional Passport Office and on 12/2/2021 I visited RPO Ahmedabad and applied for reverification and now on 19/2/2021 status show same as Police Verification Report is not clear and application is under review at Regional Passport Office.
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8/1/2021
and
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status
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showed
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pending
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physical
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police
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varification
after few
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days
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status
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Regional
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Office
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The given date is in the future, but the verb is in past tense.
11/2/2021
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status
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review
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Regional
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Office
and on
The given date is in the future, but the verb is in past tense.
12/2/2021
I
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applied
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now
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status
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show
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Police
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Report
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clear
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passport
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application
on
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8/1/2021
and
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status
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showed
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pending
for
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physical
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police
verification after few
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day's
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status
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changed
to your
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application
is under
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review
at
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Regional
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Passport
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Office
then on
The given date is in the future, but the verb is in past tense.
11/2/2021
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status
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changed
to
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Police
Verification
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Report
is not
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clear
and
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application
is under
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review
at
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Regional
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Passport
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Office
and on
The given date is in the future, but the verb is in past tense.
12/2/2021
I
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visited
RPO Ahmedabad and
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applied
for reverification and
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now
on 19/2/2021
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status
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show
same as
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Police
Verification
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Report
is not
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clear
and
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application
is under
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review
at
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Regional
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I
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submitted
my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
passport
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
application
on
The given date is in the future, but the verb is in past tense.
8/1/2021
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
status
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
showed
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pending
for
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physical
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police
Possible spelling mistake found.
varification
after few days'
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status
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changed
to your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
application
is under
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
review
at
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Regional
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Passport
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Office
then on
The given date is in the future, but the verb is in past tense.
11/2/2021
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status
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changed
to
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Police
Verification
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Report
is not
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clear
and
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application
is under
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review
at
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Regional
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Passport
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Office
and on
The given date is in the future, but the verb is in past tense.
12/2/2021
I
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
visited
RPO Ahmedabad and
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applied
for reverification and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
now
on 19/2/2021
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
status
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
show
same as
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Police
Verification
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Report
is not
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
clear
and
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application
is under
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
review
at
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Regional
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Passport
Office.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
submitted
my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
passport
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
application
on
The given date is in the future, but the verb is in past tense.
8/1/2021
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
status
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
showed
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
pending
for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
physical
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
police
Possible spelling mistake found.
varification
after few
Incorrect plural form; it does not need any apostrophe. Did you mean "days"?
day's
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status
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changed
to your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
application
is under
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
review
at
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Regional
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Passport
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Office
then on
The given date is in the future, but the verb is in past tense.
11/2/2021
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status
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changed
to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Police
Verification
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Report
is not
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clear
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
application
is under
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
review
at
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Regional
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Passport
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Office
and on
The given date is in the future, but the verb is in past tense.
12/2/2021
I
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
visited
RPO Ahmedabad and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
applied
for reverification and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
now
on 19/2/2021
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
status
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
show
same as
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Police
Verification
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Report
is not
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
clear
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
application
is under
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
review
at
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Regional
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Passport
Office.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
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submitted
my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
passport
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
application
on
The given date is in the future, but the verb is in past tense.
8/1/2021
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
status
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
showed
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
pending
for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
physical
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police
Possible spelling mistake found.
varification
after few
Apostrophe might be missing. Did you mean "days'" or "day's"?
days
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status
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changed
to your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
application
is under
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review
at
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Regional
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Passport
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Office
then on
The given date is in the future, but the verb is in past tense.
11/2/2021
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
status
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changed
to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Police
Verification
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Report
is not
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clear
and
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application
is under
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
review
at
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Regional
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Passport
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Office
and on
The given date is in the future, but the verb is in past tense.
12/2/2021
I
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
visited
RPO Ahmedabad and
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applied
for reverification and
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now
on 19/2/2021
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
status
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
show
same as
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Police
Verification
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Report
is not
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
clear
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
application
is under
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
review
at
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Regional
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Passport
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Office
.
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IELTS essay A cashless society has become more popular recently because an increased number of people likes to purchase through electronic transactions, instead of paying cash. In my view, although paying through cards is safe and convenient, the invasion of privacy and overdraft consumption will be a big issue.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
425 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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