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4. Where would you prefer to live, in the country, the city or the suburbs? Why?

4. Where would you prefer to live, in the country, the city or the suburbs? Why? XloeN
I believe it is important to have Satisfaction of needs in the places where each person live. I supposed it matter for all people to have Comfort and tranquility in their home. There some important statement that I consider for choosing the place that I like to live in. For instant, since I am an extrovert I love crowed places and also I like to meet new people in every day of my life which only can happens in big cities. Unlike other people that feel comfortable with peace I feel home in big cities. Not to mention the big cites never sleep. As we all know in cites Access to technology is much easier than in the country or suburbs. it also create better jobs with bigger salaries. Bigger payments needs education which again the best university education can only find in cites such Manchester and New York. I probably should mention that cites also have disadvantages. For example traffic is the most important thing that all citizens are struggling with in these places. Having people who like to drive their own car to work have cause air pollution which now a days is out of control. Also the number proof that more cancer is in bigger cities. To sum up, I should say as much as I love to live in city I also love to have a small house in the country maybe for vacations or for the weekends, sometime even need some peace. I live to have both peaceful places and crowded places in our lives.
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to have Comfort and tranquility in their home. There
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For instant, since I am an extrovert I
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crowed
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cities. Not to mention the
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never sleep. As we all know in
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Access to technology is much easier than in the country or suburbs.
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better jobs with bigger salaries. Bigger payments needs education which again the best university education can
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have disadvantages.
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thing that all citizens are struggling with in these
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. Having
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who like to drive their
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car to work have cause air pollution which
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the number proof that more cancer is in bigger cities.

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to have a
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in the country maybe for vacations or for the weekends, sometime even need
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peace. I
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to have both peaceful
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in our
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IELTS essay 4. Where would you prefer to live, in the country, the city or the suburbs? Why?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
260 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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