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[4/4, 9:03 PM] kmary8629: Am der [4/5, 12:25 PM] kmary8629: NOWADAYS, THERE IS A WIDESPREAD ARGUMENT ABOUT THE SUBJECT CHILDREN PUNISHMENT AS CERTAIN PEOPLE BELEIVE THAT PUNISHING OF CHILDREN WILL HELP THEM DIFFERNTIATE BETWEEN THE GOOD AND BAD ACTIONS. I STROONGLY AGREE THAT TO PUNISHING THEM WILL HELP THEM LEARN THE DIFFERENCE. THIS ESSAY WILL DISCUSS THE REASONS WHY IT IS OF ABSOLUTE NECESSITY TO APPLY PUNITIVE MEASURES ON CHILDREN. Punishing children will spikes sense of discipline also make them cultured by remembrance of consequences. That is to say that ,a child from a home that is constantly redirected with punishment when gone astray is likely to be more law abiding than their counterparts that gets away with anything they do. For instance, my cousin whose father is a soldier was able to adapt to the boarding school life than me because she was already use to being disciplined . secondly ,disciplining children will make them cultured by remembrance of consequences.A child w

[4/4, 9: 03 PM] kmary8629: Am der [4/5, 12: 25 PM] kmary8629: NOWADAYS, THERE IS A WIDESPREAD ARGUMENT ABOUT THE SUBJECT CHILDREN PUNISHMENT AS CERTAIN PEOPLE BELEIVE THAT PUNISHING OF CHILDREN WILL HELP THEM DIFFERNTIATE BETWEEN THE GOOD AND BAD ACTIONS. I STROONGLY AGREE THAT TO PUNISHING THEM WILL HELP THEM LEARN THE DIFFERENCE. THIS ESSAY WILL DISCUSS THE REASONS WHY IT IS OF ABSOLUTE NECESSITY TO APPLY PUNITIVE MEASURES ON CHILDREN. Punishing children will spikes sense of discipline also make them cultured by remembrance of consequences. That is to say that, a child from a home that is constantly redirected with punishment when gone astray is likely to be more law abiding than their counterparts that gets away with anything they do. For instance, my cousin whose father is a soldier was able to adapt to the boarding school life than me because she was already use to being disciplined. secondly, disciplining children will make them cultured by remembrance of consequences. A child w Kwna0
NOWADAYS, THERE IS A WIDESPREAD ARGUMENT ABOUT THE SUBJECT CHILDREN PUNISHMENT AS CERTAIN PEOPLE BELEIVE THAT PUNISHING OF CHILDREN WILL HELP THEM DIFFERNTIATE BETWEEN THE GOOD AND BAD ACTIONS. I STROONGLY AGREE THAT TO PUNISHING THEM WILL HELP THEM LEARN THE DIFFERENCE. THIS ESSAY WILL DISCUSS THE REASONS WHY IT IS OF ABSOLUTE NECESSITY TO APPLY PUNITIVE MEASURES ON CHILDREN. Punishing children will spikes sense of discipline also make them cultured by remembrance of consequences. That is to say that, a child from a home that is constantly redirected with punishment when gone astray is likely to be more law abiding than their counterparts that gets away with anything they do. For instance, my cousin whose father is a soldier was able to adapt to the boarding school life than me because she was already use to being disciplined. secondly, disciplining children will make them cultured by remembrance of consequences. A child will easily avoid doing the wrong thing when he remember how he will be punished if caught. Example is seen in children that suddenly pretend to be studying when they hear the sound of their parents vehicle. There are several penalties that can be giving to offenders. community services like sweeping the floor and cleaning the town hall can go along way to prevent children from doing what is wrong because, the time that would have been used for their leisure activities will be replaced with work. children value play and this will prevent them from defaulting. For example, recent survey carried on in university of calabar on effect of punish on children reveal that children who are punished are usually more cultured than others that are usually free. In conclusion,
NOWADAYS, THERE IS A WIDESPREAD ARGUMENT ABOUT THE SUBJECT
CHILDREN
PUNISHMENT AS CERTAIN
PEOPLE
BELEIVE
THAT PUNISHING OF
CHILDREN
WILL
HELP
THEM
DIFFERNTIATE
BETWEEN THE
GOOD
AND
BAD
ACTIONS. I
STROONGLY
AGREE
THAT TO PUNISHING THEM WILL
HELP
THEM LEARN THE DIFFERENCE. THIS ESSAY WILL DISCUSS THE REASONS WHY IT IS OF ABSOLUTE NECESSITY TO APPLY PUNITIVE MEASURES ON CHILDREN.

Punishing
children
will spikes sense of discipline
also
make
them cultured by remembrance of consequences.
That is
to say that, a child from a home
that is
constantly
redirected with punishment when gone astray is likely to be more
law abiding
than their counterparts that
gets
away with anything they do.
For instance
, my cousin whose father is a soldier was able to adapt to the boarding school life than me
because
she was already
use
to
being disciplined
.
secondly
, disciplining
children
will
make
them cultured by remembrance of consequences. A child will
easily
avoid doing the
wrong
thing when he
remember
how he will
be punished
if caught. Example is
seen
in
children
that
suddenly
pretend to be studying when they hear the sound of their parents vehicle.

There are several penalties that can be giving to offenders.
community
services like sweeping the floor and cleaning the town hall can go along way to
prevent
children
from doing what is
wrong
because
, the time that would have been
used
for their leisure activities will
be replaced
with work.
children
value play and this will
prevent
them from defaulting.
For example
, recent survey carried on in university of
calabar
on effect of punish on
children
reveal that
children
who
are punished
are
usually
more cultured than others that are
usually
free.

In conclusion
,
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IELTS essay [4/4, 9: 03 PM] kmary8629: Am der [4/5, 12: 25 PM] kmary8629: NOWADAYS, THERE IS A WIDESPREAD ARGUMENT ABOUT THE SUBJECT CHILDREN PUNISHMENT AS CERTAIN PEOPLE BELEIVE THAT PUNISHING OF CHILDREN WILL HELP THEM DIFFERNTIATE BETWEEN THE GOOD AND BAD ACTIONS. I STROONGLY AGREE THAT TO PUNISHING THEM WILL HELP THEM LEARN THE DIFFERENCE. THIS ESSAY WILL DISCUSS THE REASONS WHY IT IS OF ABSOLUTE NECESSITY TO APPLY PUNITIVE MEASURES ON CHILDREN. Punishing children will spikes sense of discipline also make them cultured by remembrance of consequences. That is to say that, a child from a home that is constantly redirected with punishment when gone astray is likely to be more law abiding than their counterparts that gets away with anything they do. For instance, my cousin whose father is a soldier was able to adapt to the boarding school life than me because she was already use to being disciplined. secondly, disciplining children will make them cultured by remembrance of consequences. A child w

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