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30. To be a leader or a follower, which do you prefer? Please give your opinionwith specific examples and details. v.1

30. To be a leader or a follower, which do you prefer? Please give your opinionwith specific examples and details. v. 1
It is thought by some people that English, which is now the most widely spoken languages in the world, may one day predominate over all other languages and result in their eventual disappearance. Having one language would certainly aid understanding and economic growth, but there will also be some drawbacks. One evident benefit to having one global language is that it would enable greater understanding between countries. In other words, if everyone spoke one language, there would be complete understanding between not only countries but all people throughout the world which would promote learning, the flow of information and ideas. Another reason that one language would be advantageous is that it would help economic growth. With all people speaking the same language, there will be less barriers and therefore trade would flourish between countries, resulting in a healthier world economy. On the other hand, there are obvious disadvantages to having only one global language. Firstly, it would mean that all other languages would eventually disappear and, along with them, their cultures. The diversity of cultures is one of the joys this world has to offer. Each culture is unique in its own way of life and own perspectives of the world which would all be lost if there were only one language. Secondly, it would result in the collapse of tourism because there would be no reason to travel for pleasure and interest if all countries had the same language and similar cultures. This would devastate many countries economies that rely on tourism as a source of income. In conclusion, while there are plus points for having one global language, too much would be lost as a result. Maintaining local languages and cultures should be prioritised to ensure a rich world heritage for future generations.
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having
one global
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language
is that it would enable greater understanding between
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countries
. In
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, there would be complete understanding between not
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which would promote learning, the flow of information and
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. Another reason that one
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would be advantageous is that it would
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economic growth. With all
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, there will be
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barriers and
therefore
trade would flourish between
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countries
, resulting in a healthier
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world
economy.

On the
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hand, there are obvious disadvantages to
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.
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, it would mean that all
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would
eventually
disappear and, along with them, their
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cultures
. The diversity of
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is one of the joys this
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world
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has to
offer. Each
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culture
is unique in its
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way of life and
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perspectives of the
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had the same
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and similar
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. This would devastate
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economies that rely on tourism as a source of income.

In conclusion
, while there are plus points for
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having
one global
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language
, too much would
be lost
as a result
. Maintaining local
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languages
and
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cultures
should be
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prioritised
to ensure a rich
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world
heritage for future generations.
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IELTS essay 30. To be a leader or a follower, which do you prefer? Please give your opinionwith specific examples and details. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
295 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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