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3. Should police in your country be stricter or less strict?

3. Should police in your country be stricter or less strict? eweqA
The police in my country are more and more strict. There are many examples to show that. First, always set strict rules, just need to violate the righteous punishment. For example, there are more than a hundred laws and regulations that must be followed, even if they are children of the president, but when they break the law, they will all be punished equally without exception. Secondly, I can see that the crime rate in my country is decreasing, no matter what, but now it is much lower than before. Therefore, it can be concluded that the police in my country are extremely strict in protecting everyone's safety and investigating the case.
The police in my country are more and more strict. There are
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, always set strict
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need to violate the righteous punishment.
For example
, there are more than a hundred laws and regulations that
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, even if they are children of the president,
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when they break the law, they will all
be punished
equally
without exception.
Secondly
, I can
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see
that the crime rate in my country is decreasing, no matter what,
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now
it is much lower than
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be concluded
that the police in my country are
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IELTS essay 3. Should police in your country be stricter or less strict?

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