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3 problems in learning online at school

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Nowadays, the Covid-19 pandemic takes over people’s typical life. It messed up the ways students learn at school from in-person to online, which has negative sides while applying to reality. First of all, students can get short-sighted due to long hours sitting in front of the screen. Experts say people should limit screen time to less than two hours per day. But this time, most teenagers have to sit for 3 hours every day to attend all classes. If this still happens, there will be a massive number of teenagers and kids wearing glasses. Secondly, the teachers speak a mile a minute which causes an inability to catch up with the pace in every lesson. All students hope the teachers to slow down their speed in each lecture. Sometimes, teachers slip over the mistakes that students usually make in the tests. In addition, they rarely explain for the students to understand thoroughly. Finally, it is less interaction between students and teachers in online classes. Teachers don’t care about the enthusiasm of the schoolchildren. They always carry on their speech without asking or telling a little joke to mitigate the tediousness in classes. In conclusion, online classes are the only wise solution which the governments decide to slow down the Covid-19 cases and keep people away from being infected despite the negative factors including short-sightedness, the fast speed of the speech and less interaction between teachers and students.
Nowadays, the Covid-19 pandemic takes over
people
’s typical life. It messed up the ways
students
learn at school from in-person to online, which has
negative
sides while applying to reality.

First of all
,
students
can
get
short-sighted due to long hours sitting in front of the screen. Experts say
people
should limit screen time to less than two hours per day.
But
this time, most
teenagers
have to
sit for 3 hours every day to attend all classes. If this
still
happens, there will be a massive number of
teenagers
and kids wearing glasses.

Secondly
, the
teachers
speak a mile a minute which causes an inability to catch up with the pace in every lesson. All
students
hope the
teachers
to slow down their speed in each lecture.
Sometimes
,
teachers
slip over the mistakes that
students
usually
make
in the
tests
.
In addition
, they rarely
explain
for the
students
to understand
thoroughly
.

Finally
, it is less interaction between
students
and
teachers
in online classes.
Teachers
don’t care about the enthusiasm of the schoolchildren. They always carry on their speech without asking or telling a
little
joke to mitigate the tediousness in classes.

In conclusion
, online classes are the
only
wise solution which the
governments
decide to slow down the Covid-19 cases and
keep
people
away from
being infected
despite the
negative
factors including
short-sightedness
, the
fast
speed of the speech and less interaction between
teachers
and
students
.
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IELTS essay 3 problems in learning online at school

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