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2. The best way to teach — whether as an educator, employer, or parent — is to praise positive actions and ignore negative ones.

2. The best way to teach — whether as an educator, employer, or parent — is to praise positive actions and ignore negative ones. eKEYB
The ‘correct’ method of teaching is a topic that has been debated on for centuries. With every decade, a new methodology of tutoring is founded and claimed to better than all it’s predecessors. However, there is no consensus available on the optimal way of tutoring till date. The prompt asserts that the technique of prasing the positive actions and ignoring the negative ones is the most suitable way of teaching. This essay will attempt to discuss the adverse effects such a technique may have on the students and the society. Teaching is often regarded as a highly estimable profession owing to it’s potential of shaping the thoughts and behavior of an entire generation. While rewarding students for their achievements is an important aspect of mentoring, not paying heed to their mistakes can have disastrous effects. By doing so, the tutor will be encouraging the students to not work on improving or correcting their mistakes, rather constantly dwell on their triumphs. Those who do not concentrate on bettering their mistakes will never have complete mastery over the skill that they are learning. For instance, students of music who do not correct their intonations can never be regarded as true proficients of the field. Thus, this form of educating may result in people having inadequate skill. Besides hindering the skill development of the students, this can also create a false sense of expertise in them and therefore make them overconfident in their field of work. The faults of these overconfident employees can affect the functioning of an entire organisation and this is especially concerning if the organisation is part of an industry that directly affects human life like medicine. Hence, albeit having certain good effects on a student’s mindset, positive reinforcement can be disadvantageous if equal importance is not given to identifying mistakes or negative actions and correcting them.
The ‘correct’ method of teaching is a topic that has
been debated
on for centuries. With every decade, a new methodology of tutoring
is founded
and claimed to better than all
Did you mean "its" (possessive pronoun)?
it’s
predecessors.
However
, there is no consensus available on the optimal way of tutoring till date. The prompt asserts that the technique of
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prasing
the
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positive
actions and ignoring the
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
negative
ones is the most suitable way of teaching. This essay will attempt to discuss the adverse effects such a technique may have on the
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students
and the society.

Teaching is
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often
regarded as a
highly
estimable profession owing
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to it’s potential
of shaping the thoughts and behavior of an entire generation. While rewarding
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students
for their achievements is an
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
aspect of mentoring, not paying heed to their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
mistakes
can have disastrous effects. By doing
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
, the tutor will be encouraging the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
to not work on improving or correcting their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
mistakes
,
rather
constantly
dwell on their triumphs. Those who do not concentrate on bettering their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
mistakes
will never have complete mastery over the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skill
that they are learning.
For instance
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
of music who do not correct their intonations can never
be regarded
as true proficients of the field.
Thus
, this form of educating may result in
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
having inadequate
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skill
.

Besides
hindering the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skill
development of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
, this can
also
create a false sense of expertise in them and
therefore
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
them overconfident in their field of work. The faults of these overconfident employees can affect the functioning of an entire
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organisation
and this is
especially
concerning if the
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organisation
is part of an industry that
directly
affects human life like medicine.

Hence
, albeit having certain
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
effects on a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
student’s
mindset,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
reinforcement can be disadvantageous if equal importance is not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
to identifying
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
mistakes
or
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
negative
actions and correcting them.
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IELTS essay 2. The best way to teach — whether as an educator, employer, or parent — is to praise positive actions and ignore negative ones.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
307 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
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