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2:Most Writers Of Fiction Do Not Earn Enough Money To Live From Their Writing.

2: Most Writers Of Fiction Do Not Earn Enough Money To Live From Their Writing. RWlaM
Nowadays people believe that writers, especially writers of fiction, is an occupation which can not move up their career ladder. Because, in general, only a few achieve the success in this fields while the rest find very difficult to make ends meet. In my opinion, the governments should support authors financially because of some following reasons. It is true that the most crucial definitions of culture of any nations is its literature. Moreover, good writing skills either is an innate talent or is developed through training, of course the authors need to polish their skills and enlarge their vocabulary with some practices and life experiences. However, this section does not draw a great attention as much as of other fields like industry. Because of the lacking of supporting especially budget, the writers do not continue their career as authors and change other steady jobs. Hence, the governments should help them by giving money because literature can empower culture throughout the literature masterpieces. Equally important, as we know, reading is the most important factor of our knowledge, as well as helping to orient our life style and characteristic. Yet with the modernization of our societies, youth prefer type of various amusements to literature and it is the main concern of the sociologists than have struggled with. So the government can subsidize authors to publish more books. On the other hand, the governments should consider carefully before deciding to sponsor literature. The writing have to ensure some criteria such as content, grammar, vocabulary, imagination or the values of art or education. For instance, if the book educate people and do not increase violence or advertising other bad behaviours, the book are valuable to be supported financially by the governments. In conclusion, government can be sources of revenue for authors to keep their culture and create more literatures.
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people
believe that writers,
especially
writers of fiction, is an occupation which can not
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move
up their career ladder.
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in general
,
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only
a few achieve the success in this fields while the rest find
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very
difficult to
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make
ends
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meet
. In my opinion, the
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governments
should support
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authors
financially
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because
of
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some
following reasons.

It is true that the most crucial definitions of culture of any nations is its
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literature
.
Moreover
,
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good
writing
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skills
either is an innate talent or
is developed
through training,
of course
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
authors
need to polish their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
and enlarge their vocabulary with
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
practices and life experiences.
However
, this section does not draw a great attention as much as of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
fields like industry.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Because
of the lacking of supporting
especially
budget, the writers do not continue their career as
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authors
and
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change
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other
steady jobs.
Hence
, the
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governments
should
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help
them by giving money
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because
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literature
can empower culture throughout the
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literature
masterpieces.

Equally
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important
, as we know, reading is the most
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important
factor of our knowledge,
as well
as helping to orient our life style and characteristic.
Yet
with the modernization of our societies, youth prefer type of various amusements to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
literature
and it is the main concern of the sociologists than have struggled with.
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So
the
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government
can subsidize
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
authors
to publish more books.

On the
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other
hand, the
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governments
should consider
carefully
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before
deciding to sponsor
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literature
. The writing
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have to
ensure
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some
criteria such as content, grammar, vocabulary, imagination or the values of art or education.
For instance
, if the book educate
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people
and do not increase violence or advertising
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other
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bad
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behaviours
, the book are valuable to
be supported
financially
by the
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governments
.

In conclusion
,
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government
can be sources of revenue for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
authors
to
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keep
their culture and create more
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
literatures
.
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IELTS essay 2: Most Writers Of Fiction Do Not Earn Enough Money To Live From Their Writing.

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5 paragraphs
305 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
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