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Social networking sites, for instance Facebook, are thought by some to have had a detrimental effect on individual people as well as society and local communities. However, in my opinion, while I believe that such sites are mainly beneficial to the individual, I agree that they have had a damaging effect on local communities.

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 Facebook, are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonedassumedbelievedconsidered
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 to have had a detrimental effect on individual This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
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 as society and local communities. However
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 that they have had a damaging effect on local communities. 

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