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In Some countries ,government pays unemployment people .How would this effects on people and on other people,do you agree with this or not

In Some countries, government pays unemployment people. How would this effects on people and on other people, do you agree with this or not kYL2K

Nowadays, unemployment rate has been becoming an alarming issues for many countries. To combat with this issues, regimes provide weekly allowance to the unemployed people, which they can use to fullfill in their basics needs. Some people said it is unjustice for those who are regular tax payers. I concur with former perspective, government supports make the unemployed people to independent. On first hand, official authorities should provide helps to those who really wants to do job but due to some reasons they don't gets job or loss their work. During such condition, it also makes the duty of people to demonstrate the government that they use allowance on essential works. For instance; Last year during the corona pandemic, Canda government gives $ 2000 to each person who loss their job.

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