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Imagine that you are given the power to make any one of your dreams come true. Which dream would you choose? Write about the dream that is most important to you and why you would most want it to come true.

Imagine that you are given the power to make any one of your dreams come true. Which dream would you choose? Write about the dream that is most important to you and why you would most want it to come true. 0AaRq
I had a dream yesterday. It was a nice dream, I dreamed that I was in my first house, the one near the beach, it is not that big, but warm, my relative always like to stop by vist us. They like BBQ in our garden, they like sit our garden, enjoy sunshine, and tali rk to each other. I really missed that house of my family, near the beach. Now I lived apartment in the city center, there did easy to buy the food, even in the midnight, everything you want, just so easy to buy, and also easy find station of subway, train, bus, and taxi. My school mate love my city, but I missed so much my first house, but sold.
I had a dream yesterday.

It was a nice dream, I dreamed that I was in my
first
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house
, the one near the beach, it is not that
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big
,
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warm, my relative always like to
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stop
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vist
us. They like BBQ in our garden, they like sit our garden, enjoy sunshine, and tali
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to each other.

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really
missed that
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house
of my family, near the beach.

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Now
I
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lived
apartment in the city center, there did easy to
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buy
the food, even in the midnight, everything you want,
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just
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so
easy to
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buy
, and
also
easy find station of subway, train, bus, and taxi. My school mate
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love
my city,
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but
I missed
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much my
first
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,
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sold.
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IELTS essay Imagine that you are given the power to make any one of your dreams come true. Which dream would you choose? Write about the dream that is most important to you and why you would most want it to come true.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
124 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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