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managing children in this organization has drawn me more to these children and over the years I can’t hold back my tears when I see them re-unite with their parents or probably finish secondary

managing children in this organization has drawn me more to these children and over the years I can’t hold back my tears when I see them re-unite with their parents or probably finish secondary m18pd

My managing children in this organization has drawn me more to these children and over the years I can’t hold back my tears when I see them re-unite with their parents or probrably finish secondary school, gain admission into the University or graduate from a University. These are the happiest moments of my life. I am also move to tears when they give me so much credit on how I have help them achieve what they have become. It so exhilaraing and fufilling I have resolved that to continue to offer help and support to vulnertable children, teenagers in the society. To do this better I will need to continously improve on myself and I am also blessed to have a family that supports me. T

My managing children in this organization has drawn me more to these children and over the years I can’t hold back my tears when I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
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probrably
 finish secondary school, gain admission into the University or graduate from a University. These are the happiest moments of my life. I am also
Consider using a past participle here: "moved".moved
move
 to tears when they give me This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 much credit on how I have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 them achieve what they have become. It This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
Possible spelling mistake found.exhilarating
exhilaraing
 and Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphfufilling.fufilling!fufilling?fufilling:fufilling,fufilling;
fufilling


I have resolved that to continue to offer This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 and support to Possible spelling mistake found.vulnerable
vulnertable
 children, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :juvenilesadolescents
teenagers
 in the society. To do this better I will need to Possible spelling mistake found.continuously
continously
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
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myself and
 I am also
 blessed to have a family that supports me.

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