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It is difficult to create a national human connection

It is difficult to create a national human connection BJLj6

Because we are living in a modern world, remote work has made a lot of difference in human face to face connection. especially of the internet connection today is much better, people are working from home rather than an office, it is beneficial stuff to companies but disaster to human relationship, day by day to make a real human connection has been strong companies have been having fewer difficulties connecting with it because employees have been having less personal contact, but this subject is always difficult when everyone works in the same space.

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Because
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a lot of
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especially
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today
 is much better, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 are working from home rather
 than an office, it is beneficial stuff to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisescorporations
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but
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make
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This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterCompanies
companies
 have been having fewer difficulties connecting with it This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 employees have been having less personal contact, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 this subject is always difficult when everyone works in the same space. 