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1201 second Describe a piece of clothing you like to wearYou should say: what it iswhat it looks likewhere you bought itand explain how you feel (or felt) about this piece of clothing. v.1

1201 second Describe a piece of clothing you like to wearYou should say: what it iswhat it looks likewhere you bought itand explain how you feel (or felt) about this piece of clothing. v. 1
This is an arguable topic, some people think that nowadays people like to read books via e-books rather than printed books. While, some people feel like it is a disadvantage to replace e-books with actual books. In this essay, I will give my opinions toward the statement, whether it is the advantages or disadvantages to use e-books. First of all, e-books have several advantages. I personally feel like it can reduce the usage of papers to produce the printed books. This will reduce the number of trees that have to be cut down to produce papers. It will also help to improve the environment in the long-term. Second, e-books are very convenient for people who always travel around or do not live in the same places for so long. For instance, some people have to work or live abroad every 3 or 5 years, so it is very difficult for them to carry printed books with them. E-books are the best way to help them remain their reading habit. On the other hand, it is still an arguable question, whether e-books will fully replace the printed book. I think the disadvantages of e-books is that it needs to be charged all the time and it can cause the eyestrain in the long-term. Another reason is that e-books can cost a lot of money to readers. Lastly, the variety of books that available on e-books are limited compared to the actual books that they can find in the bookstores. In my point of view, e-books are a good way for several people. It is convenient and compatible for the owner. However, it cannot fully replace the normal books because there are some groups of people who still prefer actual books and not e-books. In conclusion, I personally feel like there are advantages of using e-books. In contrast, it can also cause several problems such as eyesight problem or eye strain.
This is an arguable topic,
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some
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people
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think
that nowadays
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people
like to read
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books
via e-books
rather
than
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printed
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books
.
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While
,
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some
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people
feel like it is a disadvantage to replace

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e-books
with actual
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books
. In this essay, I will give my opinions toward the statement, whether it is the advantages or disadvantages to
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use
e-books.

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First of all
, e-books have several advantages. I
personally
feel like it can
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reduce
the usage of papers to produce the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
printed
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
. This will
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reduce
the number of trees that
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have to
be
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cut
down to produce papers. It will
also
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help
to
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improve
the environment in the long-term. Second, e-books are
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very
convenient for
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people
who always travel around or do not
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live
in the same places for
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so
long.
For instance
,
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some
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people
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have to
work or
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live
abroad every 3 or 5 years,
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so
it is
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very
difficult for them to carry
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printed
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books
with them. E-books are the best way to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
them remain their reading habit.

On the other hand
, it is
still
an arguable question, whether e-books will
fully
replace the
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printed
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book
. I
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think
the disadvantages of e-books is that it needs to
be charged
all the time and it can cause the eyestrain in the long-term. Another reason is that e-books can cost
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a lot of
money to readers.
Lastly
, the variety of
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books
that available on e-books
are limited
compared to the actual
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books
that they can find in the bookstores.

In my point of view, e-books are a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
way for several
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
. It is convenient and compatible for the owner.
However
, it cannot
fully
replace the normal
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books
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because
there are
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some
groups of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
who
still
prefer actual
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
and not e-books.

In conclusion
, I
personally
feel like there are advantages of using e-books.
In contrast
, it can
also
cause several problems such as eyesight problem or eye strain.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes
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IELTS essay 1201 second Describe a piece of clothing you like to wearYou should say: what it iswhat it looks likewhere you bought itand explain how you feel (or felt) about this piece of clothing. v. 1

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
319 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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