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1. Think of two different learning experiences in your life, one of which was successful and one which was not. Highlight the three main factors in each case which made the experience successful or unsuccessful.

1. Think of two different learning experiences in your life, one of which was successful and one which was not. Highlight the three main factors in each case which made the experience successful or unsuccessful. 8L8AV

When I was told to write about my learning experience, I didn't know for sure what I was going to write about. However, some good thoughts came later I remember when I came home from a school being very disappointed. Because I couldn’t read. When I told my mother, she encouraged me and said that I was intelligent boy. On the morning of the next day I found very big and colored book. I will never forget this nice book. Days passed very quickly. My Mom always found time to seat with me and teach me. Now I realize that experience is one of the most valuable. When I was young, I didn’t know how to swim. I went with my friends to the sea. They threw me into deep water, where I sank to the bottom. They wanted to learn me swimming. I was drug out, almost drowned. I remembered I was laying on the beach at the end.

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 to write about my learning experience, I didn't know for sure what I was going to write about. However
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 thoughts came later

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 I couldn’t read. When I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :informed
told
 my mother, she encouraged me and said that I Please check whether an article is missing: "was a intelligent" or "was an intelligent"was a intelligentwas an intelligent
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 boy. On the morning of the next
 day I found This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
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 and colored book. I will never forget this nice book. Days passed This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
quickly
. My Mom always found time to seat with me and teach me. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
Now
 I realize that experience is one of the most valuable.

When I was young, I didn’t know how to swim. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accompanied
went with
 my friends to the sea. They threw me into deep water, where I sank to the bottom. They wanted to learn me swimming. I was Consider using a past participle here: "drugged".drugged
drug
 out, almost drowned. I remembered I was laying on the beach at the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
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