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1. In about 170 words, write a paragraph to tell about your family rule.

1. In about 170 words, write a paragraph to tell about your family rule. j86G1
Every family has its own set of rules to help members of the family get along better and make family life more positive. My own family is in the same boat. Firstly, one of the most fundamental principles in my family is that everyone must treat others with respect. For example, we must wait until others have finished talking before we talk, or knock at the door before entering each other's rooms. Secondly, because both of my parents are teachers, they are very rigorous about how we dress and act. My sister and I are forbidden from wearing skintight clothing, swearing, or returning home after 10 p. m. My parents believe that if we do something like that, we will be considered impolite and will be judged by others. Last but not least, every member must share household responsibilities. My mother, for example, frequently goes to the market and prepares meals. My father takes care of the garden. I usually clean the house, and my sister does the laundry. Despite the severe regulations, all members of my family happily follow them. I was no exception. I believe that following these principles will help me mature and teach me how to behave properly in future relationships.
Every
family
has its
own
set of
rules
to
help
members of the
family
get
along better and
make
family
life more
positive
. My
own
family
is in the same boat.
Firstly
, one of the most fundamental principles in my
family
is that everyone
must
treat others with respect.
For example
, we
must
wait until others have finished talking
before
we talk, or knock at the door
before
entering each other's rooms.
Secondly
,
because
both of my parents are teachers, they are
very
rigorous about how we dress and act. My sister and I
are forbidden
from wearing skintight clothing, swearing, or returning home after 10 p. m. My parents believe that if we do something like that, we will
be considered
impolite and will
be judged
by others. Last
but
not least, every member
must
share household responsibilities. My mother,
for example
,
frequently
goes to the market and prepares meals. My father takes care of the garden. I
usually
clean the
house
, and my sister does the laundry. Despite the severe regulations, all members of my
family
happily
follow them. I was no exception. I believe that following these principles will
help
me mature and teach me how to behave
properly
in future relationships.
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IELTS essay 1. In about 170 words, write a paragraph to tell about your family rule.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
205 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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