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1. Do you like national holidays?

1. Do you like national holidays? kLQb2
I really like national holiday. In this I can spent time for my family, we talk anymore, eat together. Also in this time I can learn something new like: a language or I can spend time for myself better. In my country we have very many special occasions. I can talk are: Tet holiday, Hung King Commemoration, Mid Years Festival, National Day, Teacher Day’s…. On special day people always have free day. In this time they can spent time for family or themselves. Example in Tet Holiday, we have free time from 2 week to 3 week. In this time before new year’s eve we clean house, prepare meal for new year, shopping, buns of dumplings. In new year’s eve the family let’s be together, watch the TV show…
I
really
like national holiday. In this I can
spent
time
for my family, we talk anymore, eat together.
Also
in this
time
I can learn something
new
like: a language or I can spend
time
for myself better.

In my country we have
very
many
special occasions. I can talk are: Tet holiday, Hung King Commemoration, Mid Years Festival, National Day, Teacher Day’s….

On special day
people
always have free day. In this
time
they can
spent
time
for family or themselves. Example in Tet Holiday, we have free
time
from 2
week
to 3
week
. In this
time
before
new
year’s
eve we clean
house
, prepare meal for
new
year
, shopping, buns of dumplings. In
new
year’s
eve the family
let
’s be together,
watch
the TV
show
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IELTS essay 1. Do you like national holidays?

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
128 words
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5.0
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