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Youth replacing the old in government

Youth replacing the old in government G3REL

Let me rephrase the topic in the direction that I wish to go in the end. More and more fresh minds are replacing experienced lines in the government. Is this going to be beneficial for the country? What should people expect in the long run? These are a few queries which I am willing to address. I would like to begin with the view of the people who agree with this idea. A supporter would probably argue that a person in his or her 20s or 30s is at its best physical form so it’s body will not be a limit for activities. In addition to that, a young fresh brain is able to think out of the box and come up with new innovative solutions as they are definitely required for modern problems as we move forward in time. so what about the older people? are they totally useless? Absolutely not. What the youth are missing is the exact thing that the aged are full of and that is experience. Knowing how the system works in details and having connections with other people is something that younger occupants of governmental positions lack and in order to achieve such a valuable thing, one has to spend time. so what are the consequences of radically obeying each of these views? I would say that too many untrained minds means too many mistakes while too many old bodies could mean a few amount of work getting done. Let us note that not all the positions require the same set of skills therefore wouldn’t it be perfect if each age group took a job suitable for his age? Only then it can be expected from ones strength to compensate for others weakness and form a fully functioning system.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
Let
 me rephrase the topic in the direction that I wish to go in the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
. More and more fresh minds are replacing experienced lines in the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
. Is this going to be beneficial for the country? What should You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipate
expect
 in the long run? These are a few queries which I am willing to address.

I would like to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
begin
 with the view of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 who This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 with this This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
idea
. A supporter would probably
 argue that a person in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:their
his or her
 20s or 30s is at its best physical form This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 it’s body will not be a limit for activities. In addition
 to that, a young fresh brain is able to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 out of the box and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 up with new innovative solutions as they are definitely required for modern problems as we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocate
move
 forward in time.

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so
 what about the older You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
? This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterAre
are
 they totally
 useless? Absolutely
 not. What the youth are missing is the exact thing that the aged are full of and that is
 experience. Knowing how the system works in This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
 and having connections with other You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
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is
 something that younger occupants of governmental positions lack and in order to achieve such a valuable thing, one This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:oughts to
has to
 spend time.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterSo
so
 what are the consequences of radically
 obeying each of these views? I would say that too This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 untrained minds means too This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 mistakes while too This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 bodies could mean a Possible agreement error. The noun amount seems to be countable; consider using: "few amounts".few amounts
few amount
 of work getting done. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
Let
 us note that not all the positions require the same set of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
therefore
 wouldn’t it be perfect if each age group took a job suitable for his age? This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
Only
 then it can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipated
expected
 from Did you mean "one's"?one's
ones
 strength to compensate for others weakness and form a fully
 functioning system. 