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The chart shows the population growth rate in 1950, 1990, 2000 and 2050

The chart shows the population growth rate in 1950, 1990, 2000 and 2050 3W8rm
The chart indicates the population growth in 4 significant points: 1950, 1990, 2000 and 2050. Overall, the chart symbolizing the ages indicates that every age level did and will have both beneficial and adverse trending in 100 continuous years from 1950. On the top of the chart is over 65 age level the 1950s were the stage whose trend is going up at a rate of 60% and going even 16 percent faster in the following 40 years. Suddenly, it turned around and started decreasing for the following 30 years. Additionally, over 65 age level is predicted to continue slowing downward until 2050. Whereas, people aging from 0 to 14 turns up the opposite side as the proportion remained its stability for 40 consecutive years (5%). Since then, its rate has been increasing in an upwards curve and moreover, it is expected to grow faster starting from 2022 and likely to stop at 20% in 2050. 25 to 37-year-aged is characterized by its peculiar trend because it was shown to reach the uppermost at 20% rate in 1950. For 40 years, it kept being cut downward to only 10%. Conversely, 38 to 45 rate jumped up by 25% at the same time. 10-year was the period when people 25 to 37 rate hovered around 10% while 38 to 45-year-aged rate was keeping up with stabilizing and turned downward and after that, 25 to 37-year-olds did and will carry on slowing in increasing to almost 0 in 2050. On the other hand, the remaining one did and will meet the same situation as 25 to 37 from 1990 to 2000 until 2050. In conclusion, even though over 65-year age level increasing rate is reported to decrease by 5% in the following 30 years, it will still be the highest rate of all.
The chart indicates the population growth in 4 significant points: 1950, 1990, 2000 and 2050.

Overall
, the chart symbolizing the
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ages
indicates that every
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age
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level
did and will have both beneficial and adverse trending in 100 continuous years from 1950. On the top of the chart is over 65
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age
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level
the 1950s were the stage whose trend is going up at a
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rate
of 60% and going even 16 percent faster in the following 40 years.
Suddenly
, it turned around and
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started
decreasing for the following 30 years.
Additionally
, over 65
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age
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level
is predicted
to continue slowing downward until 2050. Whereas,
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people
aging from 0 to 14 turns up the opposite side as the proportion remained its stability for 40 consecutive years (5%). Since then, its
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rate
has been increasing in an upwards curve and
moreover
, it is
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expected
to grow faster starting from 2022 and likely to
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stop
at 20% in 2050.

25 to 37-year-aged
is characterized
by its peculiar trend
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because
it
was shown
to reach the uppermost at 20%
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rate
in 1950. For 40 years, it
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kept
being
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cut
downward to
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only
10%.
Conversely
, 38 to 45
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jumped up by 25% at the same time.
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10-year
was the period when
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people
25 to 37
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rate
hovered around 10% while 38 to 45-year-aged
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rate
was keeping up with stabilizing and turned downward and after that, 25 to 37-year-olds did and will carry on slowing in increasing to almost 0 in 2050.
On the other hand
, the remaining one did and will
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meet
the same situation as 25 to 37 from 1990 to 2000 until 2050.
In conclusion
,
even though
over
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65-year
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age
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level
increasing
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rate
is reported
to decrease by 5% in the following 30 years, it will
still
be the highest
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rate
of all.
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