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The provided illustration depicts various stages involved in the evolution of a butterfly.

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The provided illustration depicts various stages involved in the evolution of a butterfly. In general, it can be observed that the creation consists of 5 steps starting when the former butterfly lay the egg and ending with the completely matured organism. According to the diagram, after the larva hatched from the egg, it will consume the egg so as to develop to the caterpillar. Then, the caterpillar will eat the leaves as many as possible in order to make a cocoon at the chrysalis step. Subsequently, the cocoon take time to convert the creature into another form. When it have done the progress, the young butterfly has come out. Nevertheless, due to the small swings so it can not fly, the adult emerges and pump the fluid from the pupa into the swings to enlarge it afterward. Having filled up with the fluid, the insect now has grown fully and restart a new lifecycle by laying another egg.
The provided illustration depicts various stages involved in the evolution of a butterfly.

In general
, it can
be observed
that the creation consists of 5 steps starting when the former butterfly lay the egg and ending with the completely matured organism.

According to the diagram, after the larva hatched from the egg, it will consume the egg
'So as to' expresses purpose and is used in formal texts. Consider using "to"
so as to
develop to the caterpillar. Then, the caterpillar will eat the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
leaves
as
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
as possible in order to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
a cocoon at the chrysalis step.
Subsequently
, the cocoon take time to convert the creature into another form. When it
Did you mean "has"?
have
done the progress, the young butterfly has
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
out.
Nevertheless
, due to the
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
small
swings
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
it can not
fly
, the adult emerges and pump the fluid from the pupa into the swings to enlarge it afterward. Having filled up with the fluid, the insect
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
has grown
fully
and restart a new lifecycle by laying another egg.
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IELTS academic The provided illustration depicts various stages involved in the evolution of a butterfly.

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  American English
3 paragraphs
158 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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