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illustration depicts the horse evolution over the course of 40 million years.

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The provided illustration depicts the horse evolution over the course of 40 million years. In general, it can be observed that there are two main changes: The overall size of those creature has risen extensively through time. Secondly that is the modification relates to the hooves’ structure and size. 40 million years ago, When it comes to the existence of the Eohippus, it can be delineates as a medium size animal which spot from the bottom to the top. Moreover, its hooves have been recorded to possess four toes. 10 million years later, the Mesohippus appeared, experienced a slight adjustments regarding to the general size and the hooves. At that time it just gets three toes and the spot on it fades out. The next 15 million years witnessed another change in both sections. The merychuppus’ s hooves is shorter in comparison with its predecessor. Additionally, the organism in this period bore a resemblance to the stallion in this day and age with a tail and mane. The stallion after roughly 15 million years of evolution can be seen with more muscles in those legs, the mane has prolonged and the tail also. The most distinctive point that is its hooves compare with the ancestor is a significant change from 4 to 1 toes.
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: The
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size
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through time.
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that is
the modification relates to the hooves’ structure and
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size. 40
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million
years ago, When it
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Eohippus
, it can be
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as a medium
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size
animal which spot from the bottom to the top.
Moreover
, its hooves have
been recorded
to possess four toes. 10
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million
years later, the
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Mesohippus
appeared, experienced a slight
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size
and the hooves. At that time it
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three toes and the spot on it fades out.

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million
years witnessed another
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in both sections. The
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merychuppus
’ s hooves is shorter
in comparison
with its predecessor.
Additionally
, the organism in this period bore a resemblance to the stallion in this day and age with a tail and mane. The stallion after roughly 15
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million
years of evolution can be
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seen
with more muscles in those legs, the mane has prolonged and the tail
also
. The most distinctive point
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its hooves compare with the ancestor is a significant
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change
from 4 to 1 toes.
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