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You have used either the passive voice, the present perfect tense, or a complex sentence subordinator three or more times. That's good.

You have used either the passive voice, the present perfect tense, or a complex sentence subordinator three or more times. That's good. aVr0V
The given graph illustrates the tariff of oil fee from the year 2005 till future scope to 2025. Prices were reported in dollars. It can be clearly seen that fares in 2005 were predicted to report only 20 dollars while forecasted to rose 120 dollars at the end of 2025. Looking at the detail oil fares spiked slightly in 2008 and comprised of about 22 dollars. However, lubricant prices got dipped in 2010 and noted only about 18 dollars. Starting from 2016, cost soared dramatically and accounted for approximately 60 dollars. Furthermore, the same trend continued and the fuel amount got its peak in the year 2020, and was reported for 120 dollars. Future predictions were to get about 122 dollars for oil prices in 2025 as the demand for oil and natural resources was significantly rising over the period. To wind up, oil rates were continued to rose during the term and forecasted to rocketed in the upcoming future years.
The
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given
graph illustrates the tariff of
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oil
fee from the year 2005 till future scope to 2025. Prices
were reported
in
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dollars
. It can be
clearly
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seen
that fares in 2005
were predicted
to report
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only
20
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dollars
while forecasted to rose 120
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dollars
at the
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end
of 2025.

Looking at the detail
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oil
fares spiked
slightly
in 2008 and comprised of about 22
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dollars
.
However
, lubricant prices
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got
dipped in 2010 and noted
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only
about 18
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dollars
. Starting from 2016, cost soared
dramatically
and accounted for approximately 60
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dollars
.
Furthermore
, the same trend continued and the fuel amount
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got
its peak in the year 2020, and
was reported
for 120
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dollars
. Future predictions were to
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get
about 122
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dollars
for
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oil
prices in 2025 as the demand for
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oil
and natural resources was
significantly
rising over the period.

To wind up,
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oil
rates
were continued
to rose during the term and forecasted to rocketed in the upcoming future years.
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IELTS academic You have used either the passive voice, the present perfect tense, or a complex sentence subordinator three or more times. That's good.

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6.5
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