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The bar graph shows the yearly stock rate of four companies: Google, Facebook, Yahoo, Apple.

The bar graph shows the yearly stock rate of four companies: Google, Facebook, Yahoo, Apple. 26ONb

The bar graph shows the yearly stock rate of four companies: Google, Facebook, Yahoo, Apple. Overall, Facebook was the company with the increasing price of stock every year, and yahoo saw deductions in its stock each year, While apple's rate falls at the end despite having a huge peak initially in detail Facebook generated growth in the stock market year after year. in 2011, the stock price of this company was somewhere more than 5000, after a year it becomes twice as 10000. during, 2015 this company's stock rate stood over 15000. Facebook was entitled to the stock rate of almost 20, 000, the highest rate of all, on the other hand, the yahoo rate fell considerably throughout the period. yahoo had a scale of over 50000 in 2011, and end up having a minimum stock rate of nearly 20000 after terms of five years. furthermore, apple reported with significant value of over 30, 000 in 2012. However, this ratio dropped less than 5000 in 2016. Google was at the lowest in terms of stock rate among the period of five years.

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