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Coffee consumption, production and profit distribution

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The pie charts show a breakdown of the production and consumption of coffee in particular regions, and how the profits are distributed. The initial impression from the charts is that whilst Central America is recorded to be the number one coffee producing region, it is Europe that consumed that highest amount of coffee. Additionally, the majority of the profit earned from this industry goes to the shippers. As far as coffee production is concerned, 44% of coffee is produced in South America, making it the leading supplier of coffee world-wide. This is followed by Africa (19%), Asia (18%) and Central America (17%). Meanwhile, Oceania only constituted a modest 2% of the total coffee production. Regarding coffee consumption, Europeans appear to consume the most coffee, with the figure accounting for more than half. This is in marked contrast to the figures for North America and Japan at only around 10%. The remaining 27% belongs to other regions. Profits made from the production, transport and sale of coffee are not evenly shared among the all those involved in the process. Shippers received as much as 55% of the profits, which is also the highest proportion of the profits. Sellers ranked second with 25%, while the remaining 20% is evenly divided between explorers and producers.
The pie charts
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a breakdown of the
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production
and consumption of
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coffee
in particular
regions, and how the
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profits
are distributed
.

The initial impression from the charts is that whilst Central America
is recorded
to be the number one
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coffee
producing region, it is Europe that consumed that highest amount of
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coffee
.
Additionally
, the majority of the
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profit
earned from this industry goes to the shippers.

As far as
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coffee
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production
is concerned
, 44% of
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coffee
is produced
in South America, making it the leading supplier of
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coffee
world-wide. This
is followed
by Africa (19%), Asia (18%) and Central America (17%). Meanwhile, Oceania
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only
constituted a modest 2% of the total
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coffee
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production
. Regarding
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coffee
consumption, Europeans appear to consume the most
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coffee
, with the figure accounting for more than half. This is in marked contrast to the figures for North America and Japan at
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only
around 10%. The remaining 27% belongs to other regions.

Profits made from the
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production
, transport and sale of
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coffee
are not
evenly
shared among the all those involved in the process. Shippers received as much as 55% of the
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profits
, which is
also
the highest proportion of the
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profits
. Sellers ranked second with 25%, while the remaining 20% is
evenly
divided between explorers and producers.
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IELTS academic Coffee consumption, production and profit distribution

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