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The bar chart details transport preferences for young people in terms of cars, motorcycles, and bicycles in the United Kingdom, the United States, France and Italy.

The bar chart details transport preferences for young people in terms of cars, motorcycles, and bicycles in the United Kingdom, the United States, France and Italy. b2xjP
The bar chart details transport preferences for young people in terms of cars, motorcycles, and bicycles in the United Kingdom, the United States, France and Italy. Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that cars are more popular in the UK, the US and especially Italy while the French prefer to ride bicycles. In all countries except the United States, motorcycles are the least common option. Considering the statistics for cars first of all, the United States and the United Kingdom have identical figures at 60% each. Italy is noticeably higher at 75% while just 40% of younger individuals in France drive cars. In most nations, bicycles are also pervasive, with the highest number in France at 47%, followed by 30% in the UK, slightly over 10% in Italy, and precisely 10% in the US. Motorcycles are only a significant choice for younger people in the United States (30% ride motorcycles there), and in contrast the figures for France, the UK, and Italy merely reach 11%, 10%, and 9%, respectively.
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, motorcycles, and bicycles in the
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, France and Italy. Looking from an
overall
perspective, it is
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are more popular in the UK, the US and
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, motorcycles are the least common option.

Considering the statistics for
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and the
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Kingdom have identical figures at 60% each. Italy is
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higher at 75% while
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40% of younger individuals in France drive
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. In most nations, bicycles are
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pervasive, with the highest number in France at 47%, followed by 30% in the UK,
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over 10% in Italy, and
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10% in the US.

Motorcycles are
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(30% ride motorcycles there), and
in contrast
the figures for France, the UK, and Italy
merely
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respectively
.
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IELTS academic The bar chart details transport preferences for young people in terms of cars, motorcycles, and bicycles in the United Kingdom, the United States, France and Italy.

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