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The graph illustrates the number of foxes on four different island in California over twenty-year period between 1994 and 2014. Generally speaking, what stands out from the graph is that there were considerable upward trends in the foxes quanilty of Santa Catalina, Santa Cruz and San Miguel, while the number of foxes of Santa Rosa saw a subtantial fall over the period in question. Another interesting point is that Santa Rosa’s fox was the highest level in 1994, but in 2014 both of Santa Catalina and Santa Cruz was the best popular. At the beginning, the fox population of Santa Rosa started at 1780 thousand in 1994 and after that there was a subtantial decrease to 400 thousand in 1996. Following this, the number of the fox population continute to fell sightly to 100 thousand in 1998. The year 2000 and 2004 witnessed a marginal decline to the lowest level in the fox population. Next, there was a slight increase to 51 thousand in 2006 and the last eight-year continues to increase considerably. Subsequently, the fox population were upward trend to about 1000 thousand. Besides, The fox population of San Miguel began at about 450 thousand. There was a slight decline to 100 thousand. The next years, the number of fox continutes decrease significantly. From 2000 to 2004, the fox population was the same to Santa Rosa. Following this, there was a slight increase to 82 thousand in 2006, after that there was a significant increase to about 500 thounsand. The fox population stays stable in the last four years. As regards Santa Cruz, the number of fox started at about 1400 thousand in 1994, after that there was considerable decrease to 16 thousand in 2000. From 2000 to 2004 year, there was marginal rise and went up substantially to 1333 thousand the next 6 year. Finally, the fox population peaked at 1666 thousand. Similarity, Santa Catalina’s fox population began at 1333 thousand, but the 2000 year witnessed a significant decrease to 100 thousand in the number of fox. Next, there was a marginal growth to about 333 thousand in 2004, after that the population of fox continue to upward trend to 1000 thousand in 2010. Ultimately, the number of fox increase to 1666 thousand in the last four years.
The graph illustrates the
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in California over twenty-year period between 1994 and 2014.

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speaking, what stands out from the graph is that there were considerable upward trends in the
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quanilty
of Santa Catalina, Santa Cruz and San Miguel, while the
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of Santa Rosa
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subtantial
fall over the period in question. Another interesting point is that Santa Rosa’s
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was the highest level in 1994,
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in 2014 both of Santa Catalina and Santa Cruz was the best popular.

At the beginning, the
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of Santa Rosa
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at 1780 thousand in 1994 and after that there was a
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subtantial
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to 400 thousand in 1996. Following this, the
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continute
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sightly
to 100 thousand in 1998. The
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2000 and 2004 witnessed a marginal decline to the lowest level in the
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.
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Next
, there was a slight
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to 51 thousand in 2006 and the last eight-year continues to
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considerably
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Subsequently
, the
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were upward trend to about 1000 thousand.
Besides
, The
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of San Miguel began at about 450 thousand. There was a slight decline to 100 thousand. The
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years, the
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continutes
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significantly
. From 2000 to 2004, the
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was the same to Santa Rosa. Following this, there was a slight
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to 82 thousand in 2006, after that there was a significant
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to about 500
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thounsand
. The
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stays stable in the last four years.

As regards Santa Cruz, the
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at about 1400 thousand in 1994, after that there was considerable
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to 16 thousand in 2000. From 2000 to 2004
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, there was marginal rise and went up
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Finally
, the
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peaked at 1666 thousand. Similarity, Santa Catalina’s
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began at 1333 thousand,
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the 2000
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witnessed a significant
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to 100 thousand in the
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, there was a marginal growth to about 333 thousand in 2004, after that the
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of
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continue to upward trend to 1000 thousand in 2010.
Ultimately
, the
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to 1666 thousand in the last four years.
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IELTS academic oxes on four different island in California

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