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The bar graph signifies the preferences of people between car, motorcycle and bicycle among four various countries.

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The bar graph signifies the preferences of people between car, motorcycle and bicycle among four various countries. Overall, the car is the most favored vehicle in 3 countries. Whereas the motorcycle is the least preferred vehicle in 3 out of 4 countries. And there are up trends and down trends among all 4 countries. In the UK and USA, 60 people chose cars. There is a significant difference in the number of people preferring motorcycles and bicycles. It is shown that more have opted for motorcycles in the US. And, fewer youngsters chose bicycles in the US than in the UK. Comparing France and Italy, in Italy, about 3 youngsters less have chosen a motorcycle. And a significant difference can be seen in both the numbers choosing cars and bicycles. In Italy, about 25 youngsters more chose cars and about 32 youngsters fewer chose bicycles in comparison with the country France.
The bar graph signifies the preferences of
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people
between
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car
, motorcycle and
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bicycle
among four various countries.

Overall
, the
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car
is the most favored vehicle in 3 countries.
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the motorcycle is the least preferred vehicle in 3 out of 4 countries. And there are up trends and down trends among all 4 countries.

In the UK and USA, 60
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people
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chose
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cars
. There is a significant difference in the number of
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people
preferring motorcycles and
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bicycles
. It
is shown
that more have opted for motorcycles in the US. And, fewer youngsters
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chose
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bicycles
in the US than in the UK.

Comparing France and Italy, in Italy, about 3 youngsters less have chosen a motorcycle. And a significant difference can be
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seen
in both the numbers choosing
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cars
and
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bicycles
. In Italy, about 25 youngsters more
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chose
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cars
and about 32 youngsters fewer
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chose
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bicycles
in comparison
with the country France.
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IELTS academic The bar graph signifies the preferences of people between car, motorcycle and bicycle among four various countries.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
151 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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