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You have had a class discussion about sports and your teacher has asked you to suggest a sport that could be played at your college. Desribe a sport that you have tried and say why you think it would be popular with students. Write your report.

You have had a class discussion about sports and your teacher has asked you to suggest a sport that could be played at your college. Desribe a sport that you have tried and say why you think it would be popular with students. Write your report. 8gq2r
Introduction The aim of this report is to contemplate the pros and cons of choosing football which becomes an effective amusement for students at college. Indeed, it has become the king sport recently in Vietnam, intrigued by the youth. Advantages There are some strong perspectives in favour of playing soccer. It is felt that it: • A great way to improve concentration • Teaching the value teamwork and leadership • Enhancing physical health Disadvantages On the other hand, playing football would also have drawbacks. • Increasing risk of injury • Having the pressured feeling about performance before a competition • Losing concentration on studying
Introduction

The aim of this report is to contemplate the pros and cons of choosing football which becomes an effective amusement for students at college.
Indeed
, it has become the king sport recently in Vietnam, intrigued by the youth.

Advantages

There are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
strong perspectives in
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favour
of playing soccer. It
is felt
that it:

• A great way to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
concentration

• Teaching the value teamwork and leadership

• Enhancing physical health

Disadvantages

On the other hand
, playing football would
also
have drawbacks.

• Increasing
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
risk
of injury

• Having the pressured feeling about performance
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
a competition

• Losing concentration on studying
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IELTS academic You have had a class discussion about sports and your teacher has asked you to suggest a sport that could be played at your college. Desribe a sport that you have tried and say why you think it would be popular with students. Write your report.

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7 paragraphs
97 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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