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Levels of Unemployment in 3 Countries from 2004-2008

Levels of Unemployment in 3 Countries from 2004-2008 75YkX
The line chart compares and contrasts data on the changes in the levels of people who were sacked in 3 different nations over a 5-year period from 2004 to 2008. In general, Country B experienced a decreasing trend regarding the levels of discharging while Country C showed an increasing pattern regards to that value throughout the time period. Despite minor fluctuations, Country A underwent a dramatic rise in terms of the levels of unemployment throughout the time period. At the beginning of the period, the greatest levels of discharging were attributed to Country B with slightly under 3% whereas the lowest figure was recorded for Country C with slightly under 1%. More specifically, Country C witnessed the least levels of unemployment in 2004 with a few unemployed, but it was then displayed a non-stop rising and reached around 5. 5%. From 2005 to 2006, Country B remained constant at over 2%. The levels of unemployment in Country B reached a trough at slightly under 2% in 2007, country A reached a peak at slightly over 4% and reached a trough at approximately 2. 5% in 2006.
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IELTS academic Levels of Unemployment in 3 Countries from 2004-2008

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