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The bar charts illustrates how many trips are made by man and women in 5 different field in European territory.

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The bar charts illustrate how many trips are made by men and women in 5 different fields in European territory. Overall, the majority number of man make trips for traveling to work; those of women, shopping. In addition, the least number of trips belongs to day trips for both men and women. There is an apparent disparity in terms of traveling to work and shopping. To be specific, the highest number of trips made by men belongs to the former with around 330 trips as opposed to about 220 trips made by women. By contrast, there is a higher the woman making the trip for the latter than the man with approximately 270 and 190 trips. Visiting friend is made around 195 and over 200 trips for man and women, respectively while there a significantly lower number of 145 and 130 trips are recorded for sports and entertainment. The smallest number was day trips for both men and women, just only under 50 trips.
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